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I promise I am not the only person who uses Spanish things or words related to Spain. For example, last year, in the previous contest, a story was plo...

It is a vulgar expression.

I liked it. Good story. The first paragraphs are very well written, and I like how the author uses first-person narrative. At first glance, I thought ...

No, it isn’t. It doesn’t mean ‘f*ck yeah’ I explained to Hanover and Benkei what the expression actually means. Did you bother to read it?

Yes! :smile: By the way, there is a lot of talent in this forum. Just wow, the stories in this literary activity are very good, and all of them I've r...

Good one. Captures the reader from the first paragraph. It is well written, and is enjoyable. The author shows skills and technique to develop a story...

The author of this story is a nostalgic mate... Both melancholia and nostalgia are complex emotional landscapes, delving into the realms of introspect...

I have enjoyed reading this story a lot. It is very well written, clear and easy to follow. The characters and plot are credible. For a non-native spe...

I subscribe your words, Vera, but I think the author has the ability to write an epistle and this is hardly seen nowadays. I also miss the use of capi...

The Moon is Broken, what an interesting title! The author weaves an intriguing plot that captivates the reader's attention from the outset. The narrat...

Brilliant. Firstly, I appreciate the author's writing technique. It is skillfully composed and well-paced. I speculate that the author possesses a sig...

There are a lot of things in this short story. Many characters in different situations. It is important to start with the title because, thanks to thi...

I liked the story. Well written, emotional and touching. I admit stories based on melancholia and memories are one of my favorites and this story fits...

The stories are already published! It is 09:18 AM. I think I have all the time of this day for reading and commenting. Firstly, I want to congratulate...

No, 'leche' is 'fuck' :smile:

It seems that time travel is not involved in that boy’s action but something similar to Schrödinger's cat, aka a quantum superposition.

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It is very complex to explain, but we use the word ‘milk’ with the aim of avoiding obscene terms…

I think that’s impossible to get over. I suspect Australia has a lot of time travel. Does the government have any responsibility for this?

Hmm… /uploads/resized/files/ah/hr6ghxc3st922cm0.jpeg This place would be really worth visiting. At least I just discovered a location where I can expe...

What a gorgeous, excellent, beautiful and emotional story, Baden! Am I the only mate who broke in tears in this part? Jesus Christ, Joe is a lovely an...

There is a lot of Franco's weird stuff which we haven't got rid of yet. Our UTC+1 is one of them...

Yeah, this is so interesting to me. Because whilst we are talking about time zones and Christmas stuff, there are some mates from Australia and New Ze...

I definitely see the time zone of New Zealand more crazy. +12 and +13 hours ahead... Oh my goodness.

VAMOS LECHE SÓLO QUEDA UN DÍA. I promise I am not drunk... I am just very motivated by this activity. :up:

This phrase should be posted on the TPF quote cabinet. I think I have never interacted with him. But thank you for letting me know he is an Aussie as ...

Wait a minute... due to the time zone, Australia is near to starting the year 2024. So, our mates, @"Tom Storm" and @"Banno", will live in a time trav...

But the main nature of the southbox is the irony. It will be difficult (at least for me) to know if your post is ironical, literal or allegorical!

https://youtu.be/a4UQJwd3awQ?feature=shared

Let’s start the ball rolling! :cool:

Although I spent nearly three years reading all kinds of Japanese stuff, I never read that word and decorative practice. But this is the shoutbox, mat...

Hmm... Maduro, the diplomatic friend. https://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-12909253/Britain-warned-dont-mess-Venezuela-President-Maduro-slams-deca...

That's true. It is another way to see it.

Have you ever done something (like singing, cooking, arguing, etc.) on the rooftop of a building/house? When I was coming back home, I was listening t...

I understand. But whether the story resonates with you or not, I remember you made the effort on commenting. Not all the stories were my cup of tea, h...

I think it is not that easy. The causes of why some stories get more ignored than others remain unexplainable for me. I personally believe each partic...

True. I think Xi is thinking about long-term economics. Xi (and the rest of us, absolutely) considers the end of this war as a good point to start in ...

It is not a big surprise. Now the time goes on the side of Putin and Russia, so they are ready to keep fighting and maintaining a patience which we ha...

Andvake; Olavs draumar; Kveldsvaevd (Trilogien), Jon Fosse. Excellent. Fosse is not disappointing me and after nearly finishing the first short story ...

:up: I got mad after reading that you didn't pass the course when it is obvious the effort you made. The status quo and the establishment... always hi...

I agree that the first format is more legible, and it doesn't make the eyes more tired when we are reading. I didn't know that this software doesn't a...

Human saliva is disgusting, and I wish I had never read the link you posted above. But it doesn't go beyond just being a disgusting act. It is not the...

I think this obscenity should be considered a sexual offense, punished by law and a prosecutor shall proceed against the worker who does so.

True. At least, I will be very happy if the feedback on my short story is not only focused on grammar. This will mean a big improvement in my writing....

¡Qué aproveche! The Swiss are good at producing cheese, but they somehow, are most known for chocolate tabs and clock machinery.

It surprised me a lot that this racist 'label' came from the Spanish empire because I had never heard 'Zambo' in my vocabulary. Not even from the most...

I lived near a hospital. Well, being more specific, the hospital was in front of the house. The street is called 'Leo'. Easy to remember and this is w...

Mancunian, Cockney and Brummie are very cool. I think Geordie and Glasgowian are the most difficult to understand.

Nicely explained! :up:

Interesting. I have never heard or read this word and when I was in Dublin I never saw a sign with 'sambo' included on it, or I just don't remember it...