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Nice. I liked the story, a bit long but it is well written and it is easy to follow. Well, I tend to like stories where the plot is the connection wit...

I love this story, and I have enjoyed reading it. Big kudos to the author. Good job! I felt the feeling of guilt too. The two main characters: Paul an...

Nice. I see this as a picaresque story. Shaun is a low character. He gets by by with wits, and it is difficult for him to be heard or hold a job. Once...

It’s OK. Don Wislow’s topics and stuff: crime, obscene language, Mexican Spanish, police officers, patrol, gas stations, conflicts of borders, etc. It...

I have already commented four stories. I enjoy doing this, but I am going to have a break because my concentration is evaporating. I am in Toledo and ...

First of all, I love the fact that the author used a Spanish name for his/her character: Jesús Fernández Mandragóra. So, thanks! On the other hand, ge...

It’s OK. I think the author wanted to express some familiar feelings. If this story were written with a different structure, maybe the result would be...

Good story. It is well written and I enjoyed all the paragraphs. I think the plot is clear and it is easy to follow it. Congratulations to the author....

I enjoyed it. Kudos to the author, I got stuck to the story until the end. It reminds me a bit of Murakami's novels: a single protagonist (I mean, the...

Master and Emperor Mishima, yeah! :100: Heroic death, yes :flower: For me, this man will always be the representation of a legend. He received more re...

Benkei… Why do you feel that way? It seems that you hate haiku poems in English. I personally think that the two haikus published in this literary act...

I think this question should be answered by the author. Yet, what I interpret is the power and magic of the sun with us. From it is born in the overtu...

After reading all the poems, I come to the conclusion that there is a lot of artistic talent here. I felt every verse of them. It seems that they were...

These two verses are tremendous. They are the best, or at least, most important in the poem. You have to read this one very carefully and slowly. To m...

Extremely beautiful. I love when a poet reflects the nature in this way. My feelings are weird because I feel nostalgia with this kind of verses. I me...

Beautiful poem. I can hear all the sounds in my mind. It can't be considered as a "noise" when it is familiar or lovely and that's the charm of this o...

Clever poem and satire of what is the nature of this site. The author made a welcomed hymn to TPF and he/she should be decorated. Don't you think? I n...

Why did I read this as if I were singing? :lol: I want to know from the author of this poem if it is actually a song. It is catchy and original. Big k...

Good poem. I respect the aim of the author to keep metrics, rhymes and jingles. It is well written, but I missed more imagination in the stanzas.

If someone asks me to define poetry, I would use this poem as an example. Kudos to the author. I must admit that I had to read it three times until I ...

Wow! amazing! this poem is metaphysical. I enjoyed it. Kudos to the author. When the names will be published, I want to know from the author if he/she...

Oh, this makes me feel nostalgic and sad.

Congratulations for the author of this haiku or triplet. Yes, I enjoyed it. There is a lot of imagination here. Abstract, complex and philosophical. T...

2 out of these 10 poems are haikus. Nice! Good job and congrats to the authors. Now it is time to the feedback. :smile: It is 06:36 AM here, I am goin...

@"180 Proof" As we say: El qué nada no sé ahoga. It means that those who can swim, survive. :smile: or the ones who are tough in difficult moments, go...

Laws are published with the aim of ruling a society objectively (at least that's how I interpret it after eight years of law researcher and public wor...

You are misunderstanding the concepts. The handicapped person is the one who holds the rights and the carer the one who exercises them. This is the ma...

I disagree. For example: a handicapped person is not capable of exercising a lot of rights by himself. Yet, the state concedes benefits to help them o...

Each species has its own characteristics. I am aware that it is a complex matter, but this does not prevent the fact that we should be more respectful...

Animals have always been our truest allies ever. Thanks to them, humanity started to become sedentary. We owe them a lot of positive things. Nonethele...

I agree. It is true that they were not easy to legislate but it was necessary. I have full respect for those countries which rule towards the integrit...

That’s your idea.

We receive +1 shelter because we are "important", just that. I do not interpret this premise as mandatory or an accessory of the two main options of t...

It is the norm, yes. But the context gets serious when your mother is involved. You would not speak about "folks go without" because your sense of att...

I agree.

Hello again Bob. I agree with your explanation of the truth. I think here is where we agree definitively. You explained that, as much as I interpret t...

Why would your decision depend on knowing that specific data?

I think each of us would save our respective mothers. Love and a sense of family belonging is stronger than "utilitarian" choices. Whenever our family...

We disagree in the assessment of truth because I interpret this concept objectively, without any interference of mind. I didn't say it previously, but...

I totally agree with your post, but… No. Trust me when I say that most people still see the UK (or just England) as a progressive economy and nation. ...

I respect American citizens though. We should not mix up politics/politicians/bureaucracy with the country and its people. I would be mad if someone d...

This is so interesting. This literary activity could be a good place to put it into practice. I agree.

Hello again Bob! Yes, I am partially agree with you. The problem with my premises or Furmeton’s arguments is that it proves too much. Taken with suffi...

I, myself, was never aware of the significance of umbrella concepts either. As you said, Christianity and Islam are good examples. I never thought abo...

I will keep in mind this principle and try to improve my grammar skills!

On behalf of Spain and Charles V, I am sorry @"Benkei" for this.

I see. You consider “Americans” as the object of the preposition. This is more interesting for me than Trump himself, and I want to know what @"BC" th...

Hello again Bob! I agree with your position. I sound contradictory trying to find out a definition. I will try again: I think "perspectiveless" is not...

Yes, but the voting system remains after the names are released. It doesn't get closed when we discover the authors.

I agree. Apart from being negative, I personally believe that most of the "dislike" votes would be biased. If someone - for whatever reason - doesn't ...