Folks are doing a good job commenting. But we'd be further along with you, as you know. Don't pretend to be modest. Again, I know you're busy, so ther...
I must say we are, to a degree, lacking @"Amity"'s crucial reviews this time around. I know she said she's busy and has limited time, so I'm not compl...
No brekky? I feel like both stories and poems have gone cold. Maybe there's too many submissions total with this format. I'd actually like to see more...
Not everyone in the US would approve either, I’m just a vinegar fiend. I’m a garbage disposal, so your sandwich sounds good and I’d try it, but I do f...
At the risk of sounding stereotypically American, the idea of pickles not belonging on sandwiches is wild to me. What do you do with them otherwise?! ...
As we speak I’m eating a turkey sandwich topped with pickled banana peppers. Other toppings include butter lettuce, tomato, red onion, fresh yellow be...
The big reveal does seem to be the crux. I actually liked it but can see why others wouldn't. It's pretty jarring, and if it really does need to be ho...
Well, you have a bit less than two weeks to go. This seems to be a theme; we all feel the need to comment ASAP. Not true. If you read and commented on...
Hmmm, this is good, but I don't know about the complete dialogue format. I was thrown by that from the beginning, and it even caused me to delay in re...
I dunno, I really couldn't make any sense of this one. It's just a bunch of jokes poking fun at Jesus? What am I missing? Can't it be done in way that...
I found this one to be a good story overall in the sense that the plot information is good and makes sense overall. And I think the story is compellin...
Yeah, I thought this had potential. The writing is strong. It's quite slow but that's not a bad thing in my mind. But something needed to happen event...
I dunno if it'd use that as my guidepost or not for poetry, but I think I agree. I'll give a soft agree as I think you're technically correct here. I ...
Ha, I was suspecting this might be the case! But this is what we need in this "activity"; discussion feels a bit slow on the upstart. Let's argue! *fi...
I don't mean to pile on the negatives, and I will get to the positives -but for me, and again for me, and I have strange tastes, it's the focus on the...
I've read this a few times and still struggle to find a rhythm to it. I think I struggle with these short lines. I have trouble knowing where if at al...
The writing is very understated, and reminds me of Flannery O'Connor, which is quite a compliment in my mind. We're dropped in similarly to "Shaun and...
I don't remember encountering the name Quigley before, so I was tickled from the beginning. I need to re-read this, but it's rather funny and intense ...
There's an odd way in which I really like the simplicity of this story. If you know me you know I tend to be drawn towards the opposite; the weird, th...
This seems like a proper haiku, although I can't say I'm that enamored with the style, at least nowhere near as much as some are. I'll give it a posit...
I liked this. I've written similar poems where it appears that some logical point is being made in an arcane way that's perhaps not logical, and this ...
This is a nice poem. I have a thing against mid-line rhyming for some reason, so bits like this aren't really my thing: I like these lines a lot thoug...
I thought this author was really good at describing the unique and unusual physical surroundings experienced by the protagonist. I don't know what it ...
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