Amity

Getting there. If readers give up guessing and authors never verify...the game must come to an end soon.

Yay! List updated.

Thanks. List updated: So, @"Noble Dust" - you wrote: No, Dave, The Falconer or The Crossover... is that right? And now that means...The Sports Car was...

You did extraordinarily, exceptionally, exceedingly well in the few days you had. I could never have done that. No way, no how. So thank you again...a...

Appreciate the feedback. It's a brain-processing thing. Mine is scrambled!

:smile: It seems you have an allergy to Red, White and Blue too! You did very well to give excellent comments on the majority of the submissions in a ...

New and improved. Could do better :wink:

Yes, of course! Who else? Indeed. Or that they identify themselves. Thank you.

Don't be shy Benkei et al. After a guess or 2, please come clean! And get the torture over with...before Christmas...

Correct.

Correct.

Poems - more difficult than stories. (updated) Benkei -Nailing a Philosopher * Sunrise ( verified by @"Benkei") Noble Dust - Protennoia T Clark - The ...

Oh, really! I hadn't been gonna participate but here's what I got so far: (updated) Jack Cummins - Deodorant * (verified - V ) Noble Dust - The Sports...

Alors! Bien joué, mon petit choux! I think you just passed the Rorshach Test with flying colours - Red, White and Blue! Your word and thoughts so poet...

I'm sorry too.

- polls are open until tomorrow at 6.00pm UTC.

Yes. You are right. Sorry for any confusion. My 'Congrats' were not for any quantitative success.

I think once the polls close. See OP.

Have you been able to give this a re-read or a re-think? If you have followed the discussion, then it's clear that it's more than a list of ingredient...

Yes, I've enjoyed our quick-fire and yet thoughtful exchanges. Stuff keeps emerging! Another thing about the significance of the duct tape. I seem to ...

OK. But to me, this still sounds detached from any primary perception @"javi2541997" describes. It's a secondary emotion, I think, at the recognisable...

The Tourist A tourist is someone who takes time away from home, for relaxation and pleasure. Unlike explorers, they generally keep to the beaten path ...

Excellent points. But the question is only tricky if you think too much about it. I asked if YOU felt anything. All this avoidance of a simple questio...

You're forgiven.

Oh, you being you. Is that not enough?! You played Amity, that's whot. And I got lazy. So, all your fault...

Thanks for that. I feel guilty now! Unfortunately, I only read this once and thought it fantastic. Instant winner. End of. However, I wish I had read ...

All true. But it is what is in her mind. She is scared.

So, let's say or imagine that today the world is soft instead of hard and determined. Possibilities are in the air. *** What is the purpose of mountai...

What a poetic and artistic way to express your thoughts; the sense of awareness. I read it again. To see how the words were 'assembled' to give the im...

But did you feel anything? @"javi2541997" talks abut perception and emotions.

You are not being asked to make a big commentary. Sharing any one of the emotions you say you feel is not being a candle in the night. It is not to sa...

I've read this whole section again. If you imagine the scene as played out in a film, it's damned funny! 'Apparently, you're in a hurry this morning'....

Why is it a wild imagination? What emotion do you think it is javi is imagining/perceiving? Is there only one? @"javi2541997" can you help? Be less va...

Yours is a most sensitive, intelligent and articulate interpretation. It's more than just a simple perception...

Yes. So she does. When I read that, I thought she simply did not want to be identified. Funny how the mind rolls. I can't believe I didn't see all tho...

Excellent points with high degree of empathy. I think the title says it all. Nailing a philosopher. Philosopher. Capital 'P'. Is it about trying to pi...

Exactly this.

Yes. I agree she would have needed help to wrap this guy up. Your story makes complete sense. Her blistered face. I hadn't thought any more about the ...

Hah. No. I don't desire it. If Disney ever seduced me to the Dream that Someday My Prince Will Come, Harry wouldn't play a part. Funny that... What I ...

Yeah, another dimension. It's a killer!

Good points well made. Edit: Then again...after taking a second look, the patrolman does know what this man is capable of. He believes that the passen...

What about Tom Jones's soulful ballad 'Delilah'?! December 1967. Before your time?

Lovely to read this comment. Patient re-reading with reasons for the change of mind. To be applauded.

Finally. Worth the wait for this perfect feedback! Although.... I don't know that the deputy necessarily arrested the passenger in the conventional wa...

If you say so! Ah yes, magical moments. I have no idea of the magic behind the Zappai trick but it seems that what tripped out was OK-ish. Thanks agai...

@"Jamal" I disagree with my evaluation. Not the: That much was/is obvious. At the time of writing, it's the clear winner. But... there are 3 days to g...

Thank you. 8,400 haikus as a diary. That's astounding. The power of drink? A haiku a day Sobering moments Senses at play

Poems about Music. I scrolled down to the end, and felt an instant attraction to this. It sang to me. What is 10 of the Best of anything? A Conclusion...

Excellent observation. When I look at the small black and whites of older generations, I wonder who held the camera and was out of the picture but sti...