I agree. More could be done to promote this Activity. 1. Start a philosophy discussion on the main page. Stories: What are they good for? - Absolutely...
What might be useful: 1. Guidelines on how to give and receive feedback. 2. The writer being able to have a dialogue with the feedback, before the fin...
Ain't that the truth! I hope @"javi2541997" is now reflecting on the positive and interesting feedback to his story. Even if it must have been painful...
Good to see you, 180! :smile: Sorry to see you were unable to submit a story this time. This must be a first! I hope you feel better soon. Take care. ...
Not everyone. This one proved to be a challenge for me, after reading and commenting on the majority of the stories. I usually take time and patience ...
Yes. I like your idea of meditating over the meaning. Stone and paper. Brings to mind the hand game - rock, paper, scissors. Perhaps, scissors represe...
Thanks for clarification. I think everyone will have their own way to reflect on what makes a story a favourite for them. And give some indication as ...
Yes. She has connected with Gunta's spirit and creativity from the beginning. Admiring his paper houses from afar. The final section and sentence of t...
Things change. I have always taken that view. Yes. But each to their own. I really don't do 'fast' anymore, if I ever did! Close, careful reading and ...
The Woman in the Portrait Questions: Who is the woman, who painted the portrait, when and why? The story starts with 6 short lines of poetry. Do they ...
The Unrighted Leotard Leotards are usually worn by women in dancing, gymnastics or skating. Why would one be 'unrighted'? Ill-fitting. I'm thinking of...
:smile: Even if not mentioned in the feedback, it is fairly obvious to me. However, I won't be entering the Guessing game, just yet. Still reading and...
I'm glad that the author has received fruitful feedback from careful readers. Unfortunately, I have tried several times and failed to get beyond the f...
I don't think I can add anything to the feedback already given. It was an excellent read. I loved everything about it. Initially, the length put me of...
@"Tom Storm" - that was a good question to ask, after all the different responses are gathered in. And found wanting. Most interesting to read @"Darkn...
The Lark's side-kick is the one relaying the essential message, Shakespearian style? ‘There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio, than are dre...
I am still engaged by this story. Larry's dramatic strutting, sighing entrance and exit. The dialogue pinpoints his character: The Lark plays his part...
Ah, OK. Do you mean in the 3yr interval? This is unknown and open to imagination. My guess would be that the 2 guys separated and continued with whate...
Thanks for the mention. I know authors appreciate hearing from different perspectives. Every time I read a story and its feedback, I see something new...
The Lark The first thing I thought of was the bird; a clear voice singing at dawn. A favourite with artists and poets. Lark Ascending. In fact, I'm go...
The author has done a fine excellent job. There is no need for further explanations. It is left to the reader to imagine and wonder. That's the mark a...
It wasn't at all heavy handed. Its placement was just right, I didn't know about the Twilight Zone. I am pretty sure this is Connor in a dream. And th...
Nightscapes A nightscape, what could it be? A landscape at night. A physical or mental dark place. A nightmare. And there are more than one. Natural o...
I believe you are right. As ever, your close and careful reading is much appreciated. They can destroy homeless camps but the homeless are still there...
Yes. I read the story again to pick up pieces of the puzzle. The 2 pennies. Dropped. HG is nearing his final destination. Death = Home. The significan...
Really? :roll: It's about as funny as crackhead Dave the existentialist philosopher committing suicide-by-cop. And the homeless camp. Being, then not-...
I find I still have 8 stories still to read. How can that be? I feel like I've been here forever. So, perhaps, I jumped the gun a little in my enthusi...
Yes. There is a clear sexual attraction and I'm not sure it isn't mutual. At any rate, there is a tension and a silence until he offloads his squeals....
Homeward Final Part Where are we? Are we home yet? Which home? What happened to HG and Fudgy? Present time. HG is being let loose from prison. He leav...
Homeward Part 4 The original home. But not so very homely. Dad, a real horror. It starts: The tension increases and this is where HG's panic attacks b...
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