Argument Review?

This is related to my previous post "Questions about deductive reasoning..."

I think the best course for me now is to just ask for qualified help reviewing the actual argument I have attempted to construct and go from there. I do not want to post it here, but if you are willing to help, send me a message and I will reply with the information. I have no budget to actually pay for services, but there is definitely a possibility of crediting a source(s) in publication.

Thanks!