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Does anyone have any good sentence diagramming exercises?

JJJJS April 17, 2018 at 23:31 10725 views 18 comments
Can anyone help me find some good sentence diagramming exercises because I want to improve my skills...

Here is a relevant quote: "I really do not know that anything has ever been more exciting than diagramming sentences."
— Gertrude Stein

Comments (18)

Lintosophy April 17, 2018 at 23:37 #172606
I do believe life is trying to tell us something.
JJJJS April 17, 2018 at 23:45 #172609
I do believe life is trying to tell us something.


First clause: subject + auxiliary verb + main verb + direct object

Second clause: auxiliary verb + main verb + infinitive with to + pronoun + pronoun
JJJJS April 17, 2018 at 23:45 #172610
I'm not very good at this.
JJJJS April 17, 2018 at 23:58 #172612
I is the subject and everything else after is the predicate
JJJJS April 18, 2018 at 03:56 #172656
Anyone know how to learn to diagram a sentence?
BC April 18, 2018 at 05:04 #172671
We used to have to do sentence diagramming in high school, like this:

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I've since forgotten what a noun, verb, adverb, conjunction, expletive, proposition, etc. is. Are prepositioning something that street whores do, or is that a propositional phrase followed by an unlawful conjunction? It's all fucking confusion. And why are grammarians so interested in predicators anyway -- why they do not worry about the pray?

Disemboweling sentences won't help you write good, any day.
BC April 18, 2018 at 05:13 #172672
You can get "Sister Bernadette's Barking Dog: The Quirky History and Lost Art of Diagramming Sentences on Amazon, but it isn't written by Sister Bernadette.
JJJJS April 18, 2018 at 15:27 #172725
Reply to Bitter Crank this looks similar to your method: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/diagrams2/one_pager1.htm

I want practice exercises though as I'm not sure about all the component parts
BC April 18, 2018 at 19:02 #172758
Reply to JJJJS It is not clear what your objective is. Do you want to learn how to diagram sentences more effectively, or do you want to learn how to write more effectively?

If sentence analysis is your goal, then get one book on English grammar and a second book on sentence diagramming and have a ball. What sentence diagramming does for one's writing ability is teach you how to be critical of your sentence structure. Sentence analysis is useful, until it becomes "second nature".

If more effective writing is your goal, then get a book on writing style and practice, practice, practice. The Elements of Style by Strunk and White is an old standby (meaning, many writers stand by its usefulness). It's a small book with pithy content.

It's a bit difficult to assess your writing skill by using your consistently very short posts as samples.

Just got off the line with her. She mainly complained about having a failure of a son who still hasn't left home and spends all his time being a cocky twat on the philosophy forum whilst maintaining he has a 'business' and is trying to 'expand' said 'business'

yeah, sorry. I've got a few friends who listen to his stuff and I just quietly believe them to be morons because of it. Jon Oliver is pretty good agreed

Apologies, I didn't want to cause any inconvenience for the mods. It's just the easiest and aptest way to respond to the poster in question.

Thanks for the link, going to send it to a few Kool-aid drinking friends. Also, 'Ethereum' sounds like an element

well if he's in Exeter then that's a marginal seat


Your short posts are generally conversational in style which is fine when you are writing "casual text". The samples here does not pass muster for formal writing. For instance:

I think that "well if he's in Exeter then that's a marginal seat" conveys meaning quite clearly. Conversational style is often quite effective; but its informal sound is wrong for some purposes. "Exeter is a marginal seat, if that is where he is." comes closer. "If he wins in Exeter, he will win a marginal seat." is the best formal revision I could write.

two errors: "Well," should be capitalized and should be followed by a comma. Why should it be followed by a comma? I can't remember the rule, but there is one. I'll make one up here: "When you begin a sentence with purposeless words such as so, well, you know, or fuck. it should be followed by a comma."

Some individual rules apply to many situations. For instance, Avoid the passive voice. Passive voice example: The dinner will be cooked by the hotel staff. Active voice example: The hotel staff will cook the dinner.

So, [meaningless phrase followed by comma] you might try this site. Why this one? It's the first one that popped up in a Google search. There are lots of on-line grammar sites. English Grammar 101 is another site. That one also popped up first, and it happens to review all the basic grammar terms.

My personal advice: Write a lot more. Write a journal, or some such thing, as practice.
JJJJS April 18, 2018 at 21:27 #172806
Reply to Bitter Crank Thanks for your help, I want to learn to diagram sentences more effectively
JJJJS April 18, 2018 at 21:31 #172807
Will try to find a sentence diagramming book, I have a few grammar books already
BC April 19, 2018 at 00:55 #172837
Reply to JJJJS An obsession with sentence diagramming is a previously unseen disorder. Just out of curiosity, what is your interest? Most people won't study sentence diagramming, short of putting a gun to their heads.
JJJJS April 19, 2018 at 03:09 #172866
Reply to Bitter Crank If I could improve my sentence diagramming and knowledge of grammar, lexis and parts of speech it would be very useful for both my job and the qualification I am currently studying towards
BC April 19, 2018 at 03:43 #172870
Reply to JJJJS OK, so some focused study should do the trick. Parts of speech and diagramming is the easiest part. Grammar might take a bit longer.
Sir2u April 20, 2018 at 00:58 #173007
http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/sentences/free-diagramming-sentences-worksheet.html

http://teachingsquared.com/language-arts-worksheets/grammar-worksheets/sentence-diagramming-worksheets/

https://www.english-grammar-revolution.com/english-grammar-exercise.html
Deleted User April 20, 2018 at 15:06 #173094
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JJJJS April 20, 2018 at 16:32 #173110
Reply to Sir2u Thanks. Look at this one: User image
Sir2u April 20, 2018 at 20:46 #173137
Reply to JJJJS yeeks! :worry:

All of that work.