Show us your fiction!
Post your short stories as new discussion threads in this category*. They should be between 500 and 10,000 words.
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To take my mind off or on reality, I started wondering about how some people cope with crises or challenging situations by writing. Then I thought of this place and all the wonderful authors who seem to be AWOL. Have you escaped into your stories?
I'm not sure, yet, how short stories can be posted as new discussion threads.
However, I'm sure that someone will come along soon and post one just to show how easy it is.
Please :pray:
I understand that real-life concerns take over, especially in Moscow!
Also, perhaps creativity is seen as inconsequential or not as meaningful.
Perhaps the artistic spirit is silenced when real life offers too much imagination or 'what if's''.
Any writing would not necessarily be fiction but real. Or a mix.
So why limit short stories to fiction only?
Just a thought...
It's more like the way that constant physical pain can obliterate the personality.
OK, thanks to @jamalrob:
Go to the Short Stories and click on Start a New Discussion, or click Start a New Discussion and select the category Short Stories from the drop-down box. Just the same as any other new discussion.
See now I feel so stooopid.
Brain fog rules :yawn:
Quoting jamalrob
I didn't expect to hear that from you.
But yes. This war. So overwhelming and shocking.
And yet, some amazing stories of a teen writing her diary in the midst of it all, even as she takes care of her grandmother in fleeing the war. And all the red tape...
Hope you and your family stay well and safe.
All our thoughts are with you :sparkle:
Indeed, and my troubles are nothing compared to hers.
Why not writing stories about daily life in Moscow? How the "special operation" affects the Russian people? Is that controlled by power? Can I even ask this question?
Ask away, Eugene.
So far I'm just not inclined to write about that stuff, and I don't speak Russian anyway so it's difficult to know what's going on. Driving through the city the other day I saw a big "Z" on three occasions and a huge queue at MacDonalds (which is closing), and my wife's family is beset with acrimonious disputes between those who use VPNs (who can read non-state media) and those who don't. I don't know what else I have to say.
In any case, I'm more interested in writing fiction, and in fiction I eschew relevance and topicality.
Yes. But I'm never sure if comparing levels of hardship is always helpful.
So many times I hear people say they shouldn't complain because others in the world are starving, homeless, legless, etc.
And yeah, we can be grateful for what we have. Count your blessings an' all that.
As Princess Anne once said, "The poor will always be with us..."
Alright for some, eh?
We can also say that 'War will always be with us..."
In some form or other.
Daily living. Mental and physical health. Some have more conflict than others.
Others find peace in ways of thinking and clear, beautiful words.
What is important is who or how we are and the way we rise to challenges.
And where else do we find that other than in philosophy, in critical thinking, in stories, here at TPF?
So, I'd say keep on writing...when you feel able...
:sparkle:
Please find the category and add your own OP, or start a discussion and select it from the drop down. When you've done that I'll delete your post here.
That's a beautiful short story already! Too bad it's reality...
[quote=D Denby, Great Books]Sidney Morgenbesser, professor of philosophy, was smoking in the subway. A transit cop came up to Professor Morgenbesser and demanded that he put out his pipe. “What if everyone smoked?” the cop said, reprovingly. “Who are you—Kant?” the irritated professor asked, whereupon the policeman, misunderstanding “Kant” as something else, hauled Sidney Morgenbesser off to the precinct house.[/quote]
I have trouble following instructions and I can't make heads or tails of your OP. I'm not kidding. Sorry.
I've done it for you: https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/12663/kant-by-agent-smith
Quoting Agent Smith
I've edited the OP, especially for you.
Aw. Come on. Really?
Your super-de-luxe winning 4-part format was far from the usual.
Now you're just showing off and basking in past glory :razz:
Still, something to aspire to...I suppose...
Would you format your next story like that?
Well, I didn't mean the four-part-ness of it, just the paragraph formatting and dialogue spacing really.
Quoting Amity
This could be true though.
Quoting Amity
I have no idea. I'd probably avoid multiple first-person narrators, just instinctively, so maybe not.
There was a thread that discussed interpretation a couple of months ago. I really enjoyed it and I think others did too. It made me realize how little it has been discussed here on the forum. If you start such a thread, I will participate.
On the other hand, I can never figure out what Sontag is talking about.
Must have missed that.
Quoting T Clark
This alone motivates me to go ahead and do it.
Quoting T Clark
I found "Against Interpretation" pretty clear.
Then you are my enemy. But you do you!
Your peace-loving nature is so evident in everything you write that I only wish you were in charge of them.
I should write a story about this. I'm thinking of working a cave into it.
Good idea. Didn't you write the one about the guy with the invisibility ring?
That could be interesting, given continual debates surrounding what constitutes a 'true' interpretation.
I haven't read Sontag but note that she wrote 'Against Interpretation' in the mid-60s.
How was that interpreted and did she ever modify her stance?
Why would you focus on Sonntag and not others, perhaps more up-to-date?
As for Oscar Wilde and his well-known and prolific quotes. Well.
I think you need to know the context before you can even hazard a guess as to their meaning.
I don't know much about him either, or his works.
However, get this for a strange coincidence :scream:
Last night I clicked on his short story 'The Star Child', read by Gregg Margarite.
No.13 out of 20 in 'Short Story Collection Vol. 037'.
https://librivox.org/librivox-short-story-collection-vol-37/
I fell asleep as I listened. No reflection on the story or the reader; just me lying in bed.
So, I looked up the plot before posting here.
https://literature.fandom.com/wiki/The_Star-Child
Also from here:
https://fsspx.uk/en/news-events/news/star-child-oscar-wilde-57946
So, a fairy tale with symbolism and of special meaning to him? Right or wrong description...?
Re your:
'I'm against the search for symbolism, allegory, deep hidden meanings, etc. I don't think those things are at all essential to great fiction. On the contrary.'
Right away, you hook me in.
What you mean by 'great fiction'?
Fiction that's real, real, mega good?
:rofl:
So most of all TPF short stories, then?
Ah yes, 'The Best of Times Ballad' :up:
Now you're talking.
La Serenissima :cool:
I know the context and I think I can hazard a guess as to what it means, but maybe I'll wait till I make the discussion.
"Beauty is the wonder of wonders. It is only shallow people who do not judge by appearances. The true mystery of the world is the visible, not the invisible."
In a tiny nutshell: the insensitivity to beauty--particularly in a work of art--is a sign of superficiality in a person. To seek only what is behind the form of a work of art--like taking more time to read the description next to the painting for hints as to what it "means" than you take to just look at the painting--is philistine, a rejection of the actual art of the art.
I think of Nabokov's works of fiction. He didn't want to say anything, to impart a message. He wanted to play, and to create beautiful or intricate objects, to tell stories in unusually effective ways. This doesn't mean his works couldn't be moving or insightful; it just means that this stuff was all out in the open, on the surface, in the shape of the work, in its language, its imagery, and so on.
I was going to ask for an example but I had a quick look and found this:
Doesn't sound much like 'surface' work to me...but what do I know.
The article continues:
The first of 4 stories:
1. Signs and Symbols
Quoting book analysis.com
Are we lured into over-thinking? Is it an illness?
Only if we become obsessed with being right or going too deep - seeing things that aren't there.
Read light the images...or not.
Well, at this rate we'll have discussed it already here :wink:
That description uses the phrase "hidden depths", but it could have been phrased differently. The puzzles are all on the surface, but they may take a few re-reads to see them all.
Quoting Amity
Kind of, yes. But it's not exactly over-thinking, I don't think. It's thinking about the wrong things.
The examples I'd use are Pale Fire, which I read recently, and Lolita, which I read once a long time ago but didn't really get. I haven't read his short stories.
OK. But having to re-read a few times still sounds like they're hidden.
Quoting jamalrob
Right. How do you know you are thinking about the wrong things?
Intriguing so far. Perhaps a story of your choice would show what you're getting at?
Edit: cross-posts, I see you've given examples, ta.
Wonder if what you say applies to his short stories...
I guess in a sense you could say that, but that's not the kind of hidden that I or Sontag are talking about.
Gotya :100:
Your story was meaningless.
So many different kinds of interpretation of interpretation.
A Russian doll kind of hiddenness?
Maybe. I'm only concerned with whether it was interesting, cohesive, well-constructed, entertaining, convincing, fascinating, humane, beautiful, etc etc.
Seems like this thread is turning into a thread on interpretation. Is that your intention, or do you plan on starting a separate discussion.
I'll go back and reread "On Interpretation" to see if I change my mind.
How can you do all of that without the reader wanting to see meaning in the words you use and what inspired you?
As in your immersion in a certain kind of novel beforehand...it fills your mind...and senses...
You can do both.
Enjoy the story and any symbolism.
I see that this is taking us further afield.
But when the spirit is hot... :fire:
Oooops!
:snicker:
The aim is for the writing to stand on its own. Of course it's natural to wonder what inspired the writers we like, but we only wonder that because we love their writing already.
Symbolism can be cute, but it's not essential. Depends on the writer though I guess. But for me, Moby Dick is about whales.
Quoting jamalrob
Hmmm. That is why well-known authors sometimes write a completely different genre under a nom-de-plume. To see if their writing is given the same value or criticism.
That figures...
But, for me, the wonder is part of the whole journey...even when I don't know the author.
As in TPF Short Story Competition.
Enough already.
That might be to do with the community aspect of it. It is great to hear the stories about how stories were written, especially from people you know, or kind of know.
OK. Time out.
There's only so much stimulation I can handle...
Until whenever :sparkle:
I like the end of that quote. Reminds me of the song... "Now you're just somebody that I used to know". I think that we are all people that we 'kind of know'. I wonder when you can really know another person. Saying "I know you" or "you know me" takes a leap of faith, akin to the belief in God or the confidence in your moral judgment of an action.
I am just somebody that you kind of know.
Yes, but we TPFers might know you in certain ways better than people you see every day, like your local cheesemonger, who may have no opinion on your reading of Hegel or your view of Kant's notion of freedom.
My point exactly. We are all "somebody that we kind of know", even to the most intimate people around us. You at PF see an image of me, that is also me, a part of me. However, many people who would say they know me better, do not know that side. When I say "I know you", I am always making a leap, because I do not know most of you actually. You signal something else with it than an objective state of affairs. Maybe: 'I like you', or 'we tend to think the same about things'. Genuine knowledge of the other, I venture, is not possible.
Have you tried the "Escape" button yet on your keyboard? It has saved me from more than one rather precarious situation.
You are on the wall of my cave, man.
In other words, you don't know how right or wrong you are in being how right or how wrong you are in your perception of knowing anything.
Just don't cave yourself into a corner.
I like symbolism, and I think it is the greatest form of literature when the entire story or novel is plain description, plain events and plain dialogue, it hangs together as a realistic piece and nothing is magical or even unexpected, yet the whole thing as a unit gives out a screaming symbolistic message.
The most obvious, clear, and powerful example that most North Americans are familiar with of this effect is "The Old Man And The Sea."
Am I gonna have to wheel Elvis out again...
A little less conversation, a little more action, please
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWVMXLSS1cA
Quoting Tobias
Right. I have come to get to kinda know people a little by what they say and do.
Also, via The Short Story Competition. The reading of the stories, the Q&A's, and guessing whodunnit.
And yeah, realising that life at TPF is at times somewhat surreal.
I love to hear even part of your stories.
But when are you gonna write a short story outwith the competition?
Or doesn't that appeal to you?
We're 3 pages into a blah-de-blah conversation.
Come on. I wanna see your moves :cool:
And don't say, "You first!" cos that ain't gonna happen anytime soon.
Maybe Jammy (Jamalrob) ought to create another thread for short-short fiction. I'd like that.
Quoting Tobias
Have you not been paying attention in class?
@jamalrob will be :rage:
Understood.
'Show Us Your Fiction!' could cover any and all types.
Not just short stories of a particular length.
Hmmm. Dunno.
I think you would probably be pointed to another 'Creativity' thread where all kinds of everything is mashed up...
:lol:
You did it right :up:
Are you sure Tobias did it right?
I am being stupid. I opened "eden by night" and it turns out it's Tobias' piece. A very well written one, too.
I think too, but you would kick me off this site if I voiced the thought going through my head right now.
In fact you can claim (and I can't refute if you do) that all my posts are wrong and invalid and false on this website originally, and I edit them later, after I learned from other people's posts what I really ought to have said to sound smart.
Be my guest, claim that!
But what I might do is move the competitions into this category.
:wink:
:smirk:
:gasp: Are we all in battle mode now?
Crisis, What Crisis?
Made me think of Supertramp. Wanted to hear a little, give a little bit:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WA7JY1OoxnU
Somebody's Top 20 selection, snippets:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nxoxywuN8tg
Chill :cool:
Yeah, good memories and I enjoyed the re-visit :smile:
Ah. OK. Whatever you say...
Quoting jamalrob
So, show me your soft spot :razz:
But I gotta go now...until then...
Dreamer
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9SwQ9iavJeI
What happened? Who's a tramp? Why am I fighting? Can I take over here when Putin opens Scottish Gulag?
Oh, don't get me started on dictators, royalty and tramps.
Trump. Bastard. Son of a Scotswoman. A damned MacLeod :rage:
:lol:
Would love to!
Awww, I thought everyone loved the Scottish!
I have a Soft Cell for Supertramp.