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A different style of interpretation: Conceptual Reconstructionism

thaumasnot November 28, 2021 at 15:43 9450 views 144 comments
Hi,

I just finished a book about “conceptual reconstructionism,” and I’m looking for opinions and critical feedback. I will attach the manifesto at the end of this post.

Conceptual reconstructionism can be seen as a style of interpretation (of art and various other types of content) that consciously avoids value judgments and focuses on the “reconstruction” of works, which is the process of looking at (and transcribing) what I call their “medium-specific narratives.” The main motivation is a dissatisfaction with reviewing and analysis in general and how they fail to capture a certain uniqueness in certain works.

The intent for reconstructions is to rediscover works of art (and other types of content, like philosophy/science literature), share discoveries in objective terms, and build a community that is not based on tastes and value, and transcends the barriers between artist, critic and consumer.

I would be glad to discuss the concept/project with you. In addition, I’m particularly looking for criticism about my writing (is it readable? is it logically sound? is it repeating something that already exists?). You can message me if you’re interested in reading the book or knowing more about the project, or we can discuss things here.

Without further ado, here’s the manifesto. Thank you for reading!


The Manifesto of Conceptual Reconstructionism

The Internet offers a platform of expression for all kinds of reviewers. In particular, there’s on Youtube a healthy section of non-seasoned reviewers who don’t read from script and mostly improvize, unedited. So a familiar sight is a reviewer struggling to find what to say next, only saved by a reflex: “oh yes, I didn’t mention X.” As an example, for a music album, X could be “the variety,” “the lyrics,” or “the production.” Why do they now feel compelled to mention this aspect rather than another? Why in this order? How necessary is it to the review, and what is the nature of its connection to the review, if it’s something that the reviewer almost omitted? In fact, we could ask the same questions for all the points raised by the reviewer.

The point is that underlying this reflex is actually a very common enumerative thought process. Professional reviewers use it as well. The only difference is that they internalized it so well that it looks natural.

Reviews are far from being the only vector of that thought process. For example, if you read the Wikipedia entry for a country, you’ll find an enumeration of various subjects: History, Geography, Government and Politics, Economy, Demographics, etc. Inside the info box, you’ll find the capital, the languages, nationality, religion, etc. Even the paragraphs are enumerative in nature.

France (French: [f???s]), officially the French Republic (French: République française), is a transcontinental country spanning Western Europe and overseas regions and territories in the Americas and the Atlantic, Pacific and Indian Oceans. Including all of its territories, France has twelve time zones, the most of any country. Its metropolitan area extends from the Rhine to the Atlantic Ocean and from the Mediterranean Sea to the English Channel and the North Sea; overseas territories include French Guiana in South America, Saint Pierre and Miquelon in the North Atlantic, the French West Indies, and several islands in Oceania and the Indian Ocean. [color=#0000FF]Due to its several coastal territories, France has the largest exclusive economic zone in the world.[/color] France borders Belgium, Luxembourg, Germany, Switzerland, Monaco, Italy, Andorra and Spain in Europe, as well as the Netherlands, Suriname and Brazil in the Americas. Its eighteen integral regions (five of which are overseas) span a combined area of 643,801 km2 (248,573 sq mi) and [color=#FF0000]over 67 million people[/color] (as of May 2021). [color=#00FF00]France is a unitary semi-presidential republic[/color] [color=#FF0000]with its capital in Paris, the country’s largest city[/color] and main [color=#BF00FF]cultural[/color] and [color=#0000FF]commercial[/color] centre; other major urban areas include Lyon, Marseille, Toulouse, Bordeaux, Lille and Nice.

Under careful examination, the description is a grab-bag of geographical, economical, political, cultural and demographical considerations which give rise to a mosaic. That is, it is based on juxtaposition rather than other types of relation (temporal order, cause-effect, deduction, formal similarity, etc.). It characteristically builds up into a familiar “messy” whole: while it is conventional and reads well, the mosaic typically doesn’t have a clear direction, with one notable exception.

The standard reviewing style: the interpretation of the average value. The “too much, not enough” syndrome

Consuming reviews and interpretations can be:

1. for information
2. for pleasure

The mosaic suits the consumption for information. Now, in the interpretation of art, as well as in reviews where a product needs to be judged, this mosaic is the basis for what I call the interpretation of the average value. “Average value” refers to the fact that the features of the mosaic are individually evaluated, and the evaluations are “averaged” into an overall value judgment (sometimes even following a mathematical formula).

That’s how the mosaic acquires direction: if each feature is assigned a value (even implicitly), then the whole makes sense as an average value. For example, if a music review states that “the ornery arpeggios provide an overarching gracefully balanced counterpoint” and you wonder why this is sandwiched between remarks about the tonality and the “modern sound,” the remarks make sense as good things if the review concludes to a “brilliant composition.”

In the context of the consumption for pleasure, we enjoy the work’s content united to the mosaic of interpretation, although the connection has a fundamentally conjectural quality. Take the live performance of a song. The enjoyment of the song is heightened by the belief in a certain connection to the musicians, the technicality of their performance, how they seem to enjoy themselves too, etc. Even if the connection is real, the conjecturing is always in the background: the audience always has to transcend a fundamental doubt, however small, regarding the connection (playback, autotune, whether the performance is that difficult to pull off, and so on).

From the angle of the consumption for pleasure, the mosaic can become a cliché, just like the content. If I speak about the author and various biographical facts about them, I, in effect, produce a cliché. The cliché is informative, but a cliché nonetheless. It has a characteristic quality of contingency that makes you question how essential it really is to enjoyment. You can, as a mind game, attribute various authors to the content, and see that it works the same way as when the “real” author is involved: the chosen author colors the work uniquely, but its impact on our experiencing of the content (as opposed to the appreciation of its meaning and context) is limited and diffuse. I call this method of assessing the relative merits of conjecturing the inconsequential conjecture test. It can be applied to any feature of the mosaic, including meaning, historical significance, virtuosity, emotionality, etc.

The mosaic is predisposed to distract from the content, as if through centrifugal force. Reviewing is known to relate to the content in the following ways:

* Description for the blind or deaf (for example, enumerating the instruments in a musical piece, or, if there’s a tree in a painting, saying, with style, that there’s a tree)
* Analysis “through the microscope”, that is, features of the mosaic are individually looked at in detail (for example, the rhyming structure of a poem, or the references and historical context of a painting)
* Myopic overviews, mostly in the form of categorizations (for example, categorizing a Beethoven piece as Romantic-era classical music)

In that sense, the mosaic is always either “too much” or “not enough” with respect to the content: too much in the sense of over-analyzing microscopically to the detriment of the big picture, and not enough in the sense of losing sense of the specific when putting labels on the content. A notable labelling act is the value judgment. A statement such as “I like this work” is always a highly compromised abstraction of a rich experience. It tries to cram a more or less unique cognitive process into one quantity (informal or numerical, it doesn’t matter). The loss of nuance is why its explanatory power is so inconsistent. For example, someone likes category A and dislikes category B, but there are things in B they like and things in A they don’t. Or someone explains that they like something because of features A, B and C, but dislike another thing with the same features. Or 2 people say the same thing about X, but one will keep it, and the other will sell it.

The mosaic’s limitless extensivity offers the promise of exhaustivity (enumerate as many things as possible), but has the mosaic actually exhausted everything that has to be said of the content?

The interpretation of the medium-specific narratives

The interpretation of the average value doesn’t match the actual experiencing of content, which is a process with a narrative quality. Not narrative in the sense of a traditional story, but in a medium-specific sense. For example, if the medium is painting, a medium-specific narrative is based on visual perceptions (“events”) and how they relate to each other (through morphology, color, transformation, topology, etc.) on a timeline affixed to the viewer’s roaming gaze. Even in a text-based medium, a medium-specific narrative doesn’t always coincide with the traditional concept of story or plot. That’s because medium-specific specificity isn’t so much about what the words mean, but how they are told. For example, “Anna gives Bob a present” is not equivalent to “Bob is given a present by Anna” medium-specifically speaking.

Narratives are often perceived myopically. Temporality is typically thingified. For example, music has the concepts of rythm and tempo, painting and cinematography have the concept of scene, etc. These concepts reflect a general attitude toward processes that reduces them into a mosaic of components that can be considered in isolation. For example, to describe how a board game plays (a fundamentally continuous process), board game reviews are routinely satisfied with a mechanical enumeration of game turn steps, without the precise tactical or strategic sense of flow that underlies all gameplays.

The interpretation of the medium-specific narrative restores the granularity, temporality and epiphanic quality of content.

A wake-up signal: reconstruction. Markup notation. Conventional medium delimitation. Pure referentiality.

Reconstruction is a product of the interpretation of the medium-specific narratives. It consists in transcribing a medium-specific narrative perceived in a work.

The interest of reconstruction is in pushing the scope of the perceived narrative to the physical boundaries of the medium. This holistic approach justifies the concept of work as a self-contained unit of experience, and yet it is not myopic, since it builds on medium-specific elements that are concretely perceived. It rewards a wide attention span and sensory memory by bringing up content that is not challenging to see, but challenging to remember in fine granularity (song-wide narrative, book-wide narrative, etc). It is not about noting well-hidden details of the medium like some sort of private investigator, but how a narrative emerges from even the most obvious elements, as long as the attention span doesn’t fail.

Reconstruction is based on 2 conventions.

Conventional medium delimitation states upfront what is considered the “medium” that will be reconstructed. Most notably, it makes the dichotomy between interpretation and content mostly irrelevant (as the consumption of interpretation for pleasure announced), reducing it to a mere decision that obsoletes the core questions of traditional interpretation (is the interpretation right? Does it describe the author’s real intention?). When the medium delimitation has as little to do with the mosaic as possible, we talk of a pure reconstruction.

Pure referentiality is simultaneously a concept and a convention implying that the reconstruction is only meant to reference the medium, without adding any content beyond the conventional medium delimitation. This implies that, unlike most interpretations, the point of reconstruction is not being true, correct, or “on point,” in the sense that referentiality should be trivial to verify. Unlike traditional interpretation, reconstruction is not meant to explain a content or even give an idea thereof. The reader is supposed to have access to the content, and to match it to the reconstruction. It is generally recommended to have experienced the content before reading the reconstruction.

Reconstruction uses a special markup notation to concisely transcribe narratives through the use of references. For example, this [sub]DEF[/sub] is referred to by that . The DEF subscript indicates the introduction of a new referent, i.e., a definition. Each definition must be understood in respect to the context of its introduction, which (informally) consists in the medium-specific elements that contain it (for example, if the definition refers to a melodic motif, the containing musical phrase is the motif’s immediate context). So is a mnemonic more specific than just the word “referent” without the markup.

Besides the technical advantages (conciseness, hyperlinking), the markup notation acts as a wake-up signal and a reminder that how we interpret a work is a choice that conditions our mindset regarding how we approach the content. The unusual formalism ensures that the reconstruction cannot be read casually, thus coercing the reader into a mindset proper to the interpretation of medium-specific narratives.

Societal and cognitive impact of the choice of interpretation style. The unnecessary role segregation

The mosaic, as a format of content, is just one symptom of amnesic thought processes that forget narrative relations, leading to a simplistic interpretation of information and reality, with unfortunate philosophical and cultural consequences like excessive vulgarization and false lifestyle dichotomies (for example, being a commercially successful mainstream artist versus staying “authentic” and underground). In particular, value-based interpretation creates artificial communication barriers that become social barriers. Role segregation is a consequence of the opacity of value judgments (e.g., a renowned critic’s opinion is unfalsifiable but considered authoritative), and feeds into an inferiority complex. It paints “great” artists as geniuses, and “great” critics as authority figures.

Most people make the common assumption that roles require elite knowledge and competence, and this is true, but only to the extent that their view conforms to value-based preconceptions. In comparison, medium-specific narratives only require imagination and attention span. As in conceptual art, they don’t require implementation, let alone sublime aesthetics or technical perfection, in the sense that they don’t seek neither external validation, nor any pandering to tastes and value judgments. That is, they suggest a tautological artist: we’re being artists in the process of interpreting medium-specific narratives, as a form of active consumption similar to creation in terms of intellectual faculties involved.

With the focus of interpretation moving away from value judgments, not only do the critics lose all their privileges, but the gravity center of communities, now educated on on the sterile and manipulative aspects of value, shifts to the sharing of perceived content. Let me quote a random thread about a game on a gaming forum:

Such a great thematic game.

Congrats to the designer on this one. He does this all himself and you can seriously feel the love he puts in to it.

Just love this game. Such smooth play, so thematic. Quick to set up.

This is one I picked up after all the praise last year, and unfortunately I didn’t enjoy it all that much. It felt very flavorful, but not thematic.

What a great game!

I’ve enjoyed this game quite a bit so far, but I'm kind of surprised to see it so highly regarded by so many others.

Theme and cost held me off for awhile, but continued positive reviews was enough to push me. No regrets.

What is the end result of this discussion? A cacophony of “I like” and “I don’t like” that ignore each other. There are several phenomena at work here:

* Posting, as an essentially anonymous user, gratuitous value judgments to an anonymous crowd
* The demand for gratuitous value judgments

Both cases are supported by a collective belief in a certain “fun” in sharing opinions, but it’s always the same dialog of the deaf, again and again, that feeds into a superficial communitarianism. Not coincidentally, discussions about art (debates like “is X art?” “What is the best art?”) end up with same acknowledgment that “it’s just a matter of taste.” Misleadingly, value judgments come with a certain precision language similar to fine dining and wine tasting, which tries to explain value through ever-so-refined “interesting” analysis, but is ultimately powerless at explaining the leap from observations to value judgments.

A point can be made that the gap between review and reconstruction is just a problem of communication; that the mosaic and value don’t exclude a certain awareness of the medium-specific narratives. It can be true, although it is more natural for the reverse to be the case, which is that reviews as written reflect how their authors actually think (this is for example made clear by the trending reaction videos on Youtube). In the end, reconstruction addresses both how we think, and how we actually communicate what we think.

Rediscovering content and avoiding grand theories

Reconstruction invites to rediscover individual works through their medium-specific narratives. Not albums, but songs. Not genres, styles, techniques, performers, authors, but self-contained content. Works are reconstructed in objective, constructive terms that are not just vaguely interesting generalizations and speculations inconsequential to the experiencing of the content.

The focus on experiencing individual works and what makes each unique (as medium-specific narratives rather than consumerist novelties based on aesthetics, theme, and so on) directly contradicts the need for grand theories (what is Art, what is great Art, etc.). Reconstruction isn’t so much a theory as the cognitive process of finding medium-specific narratives. A written reconstruction, as purely referential material, is an ephemereal product destined to be forgotten as the readers learn to interpret the reconstructed content without it. Likewise, this manifesto and the accompanying book are destined to fall by the wayside. They’re not enduring theories of what interpretation should be, but gateways to the reconstruction of great works.


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This ends the Manifesto. Thank you for reading, and thanks in advance for any critical feedback.

Comments (144)

SatmBopd November 28, 2021 at 20:18 #625177
I am intrigued by the notion of increasing the quality of review discussions, but somewhat skeptical and do not fully comprehend the idea of removing value judgments entirely. Looking at specific works individually, and making one's best effort (probably imperfectly) to abandon all preconceived notions before addressing a work sounds really cool- but am I oversimplifying it? Is this all you have to do? Say if I just look at one episode of a TV series and analyse it on its own merits, rather than looking at the whole series?

I think this sounds intriguing with my only concern being the relevance of emotion in the consumption of art. Do you think your manifesto allows us to discuss the emotional impact of certain works (even if it is somewhat subjective)? I'm suspicious of trying to remove values or subjective judgment, because I do not think such efforts will ever be fully successful without us essentially sacrificing our humanity. Someone who claims to have an objective framework who still conceived of said framework and engages with it thanks to values that they still hold (consciously or not) is being very subtly deceitful, whether intentionally or not.

Finally, and most importantly; lets say I was inspired by this manifesto, how exactly would I construct a review in this manner? Is there an example of Conceptual Reconstructionism that you can point to/ make?
thaumasnot November 29, 2021 at 12:58 #625461
Hello,

Thank you for your interest!

You’re right, that’s “all you have to do,” with an emphasis on attention span and sensory memory. For a TV series, there is actually an argument that the whole series can be considered a self-contained unit. It’s your choice (conventional medium delimitation). As a rule of thumb, I would only do that if the TV series is short (2 seasons max) or has a sense of closure, but that’s a personal choice.

Regarding emotional impact, the point of reconstruction is that it looks at the “raw data” before the emotional impact. By doing this, it can actually change the emotions you get from the content. So it’s not about eliminating emotion, but more about focusing on our perceptions first. The emotions will follow, even though they’re not mentioned by the reconstruction. You have a point about value implicitly held by reconstruction. But the only purpose of reconstruction is to enable the sharing of objective content. So it’s, by its very nature, and contrary to traditional interpretation, not worth anything by itself. It melds into the background.

For reconstructions, there are examples in the book, published on my site. I’m currently working on writing down the reconstruction of As I Lay Dying by William Faulkner. There are also many reconstructions I need to type or translate from French (some paintings and movies), but the most interesting ones are those about music, and I need to decide how I’ll present reconstructions of music. The project is in its infancy, so there’s a lot to do.

If you’re interested, I can send you links (can’t disclose them here due to forum policies).
thaumasnot November 29, 2021 at 12:58 #625462
Answering this question: 

lets say I was inspired by this manifesto, how exactly would I construct a review in this manner?


Reconstructing is to describe (or rather pointing to) the points of the medium that build up to a narrative (so any part of the description must, by definition of a narrative, have a relation with another part of the description). Instead of, or in addition to, describing (through technical terms or through metaphors), you can provide more intuitive references to the content. For example, when reconstructing literature, I quote a lot. For painting and movies, I provide images with annotations. For music, I haven’t decided yet. I think about including timestamps that can be clicked to play the corresponding segment.
thaumasnot November 29, 2021 at 13:35 #625465
I see in your profile you've quoted Ode to a Grecian Urn. The book contains a reconstruction of that poem. So here's the extract from the book pertaining to that poem:



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When I look for a medium-specific narrative, I try to find one that roughly covers the whole work, one that justifies the work as a unit. Here’s one:

  • 1. The narrator questions a silent “thou.”
  • 2. The narrator associates the silent (“those unheard are sweeter”) with the eternal (“canst not leave […] nor ever,” “never, never”, “For ever,” etc.).
  • 3. The eternal is then associated with repetitions of “happy” and “love” (“Ah, happy, happy boughs!”, “happy melodist”, “More happy love! more happy, happy love!”).
  • 4. Finally, when the eternally silent (“Thou, silent form, dost tease us out of thought as doth eternity”) says something, it addresses the narrator’s questioning (“all ye need to know”) through structures of repetiton, reminiscent of the repetitions of “happy:” “Beauty is truth, truth beauty, that is all ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.”


All the terms of the interpretations are reused and combined in different contexts. In (1), the “silent thou” is asked questions which are addressed in (4). The repetitions of the answer “beauty is truth, truth beauty” echo the repetitions of the words happy and love in (3), but in a non-silent context which contrasts the silence in (1) and (2). A narrative thus emerges.

This narrative is medium-specific in the sense that it takes elements directly from the poem with almost no recourse to subjective interpretation. I say almost, because there is certainly some layer of interpretation there. I did skip many details, even entire parts of the poem. I also didn’t mention the stanza structure or the rhyme schemes. Implicit in these oversights is an assessment that they weren’t needed in the narrative I wanted to highlight. If you study the stanza structure or the poem’s themes, as most scholars do, you get invariants rather than a narrative. But this choice, to prefer this poem-wide narrative over invariants, is already an act of subjective interpretation, even if, in the last analysis, I just highlighted certain passages of the poem and their relationships.

I could cook the interpretation a little bit, because it is a little too raw as it is. I could add some commentary that would express the feelings and value judgments that led me to this narrative. I could say this:

« John Keats thus makes us realize that our questionings are superfluous, in the sense that the answer was already implied in the narrator’s enthusiastic exuberance. The answer is in the rythmic expressivity—whether in the questioning itself (the series of “what”) or in the insistence on eternity, happiness and love—that almost seems to anticipate T.S. Eliot’s criticism of the “grammatically meaningless” statement that “beauty is truth, truth beauty.” »

I will usually choose to stay away from this style of writing, but this is a purely personal choice. I personally like to address an audience that doesn’t need to be spoon-fed and will arrive at its own conclusions. In fact, I would argue that the raw interpretation doesn’t need any conclusion. The elements of the narrative are interlinked with one another in such a way that the whole point is lost as soon as one tries to wrap things up in a generic conclusion—i.e., the narrative is self-contained and self-conclusive, somewhat like “beauty is truth, truth beauty” is self-contained and self-conclusive. In fact, any type of value-based conclusion would attract the sort of (rightful) criticism against awkward attempts at penetrating non-objective concepts (like authorial intention or imagination) through objective interpretation, such as Derrida’s criticism of Jean Rousset when the latter tried to describe passion in literature (or at least invite his readers to sense it) using only geometrical concepts like “rings,” “symmetry,” and so on.
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thaumasnot December 22, 2021 at 13:02 #633872
To follow up, I have published reconstructions as proofs of concept for all major media types:

- Novels (As I Lay Dying by Faulkner, The Old Man and The Sea by Hemingway)
- Music (Soon to be dead by Dismember)
- Painting (La Vie by Picasso)
- Movie (Angst by Gerald Kargl)
- Photography (Damsels wearing face packs posing before panels by Jay Maisel)
thaumasnot December 22, 2021 at 13:02 #633873
I’ve also implemented something special for music reconstructions. They contain an audio player, and sound references can be played individually. They are also highlighted karaoke-style when the music plays.
SatmBopd December 31, 2021 at 14:40 #637222
Reply to thaumasnot Hey, didn't see this reply for a while, sorry. I'm definitely still intrigued by/ trying to comprehend this methodology.
I was introduced to "Ode on a Grecian Urn" in an undergraduate literature class, and I feel like the academic analysis (as I remember it) from our professor was very similar to the breakdown you presented, but with an added focus on stanza structure/ rhyme schemes and importantly, a heavy emphasis on Keats' biography and larger body of work, along with the historical context of the romanticism movement generally. I feel like this information was interesting to me because I like history, but I'm curious how you feel about the relevance of this information to the interpretation of the work. I suppose if you are just trying to extract narratives you'd just want to look at the text itself, but I guess... what is the purpose of extracting specific narratives? I personally would not want to entirely compartmentalize the interpretation of art in this way, because broader contexts and movements across history could both be important narratives in and of themselves, as well as provide deeper insight into the meaning of the work/ which aspects of the text were most important. Say if you're looking at romantic poets as a whole, and you're able to focus your analysis of their work on the things that they each do differently from each other, then aren't you extracting something more important or unique about each work?
Would be interested in seeing more reconstructions though. If you have links or something I'm open to PMs.
thaumasnot December 31, 2021 at 15:42 #637238
Reply to SatmBopd

“broader contexts and movements across history could both be important narratives in and of themselves, as well as provide deeper insight into the meaning of the work/ which aspects of the text were most important” :

The key term is “important” : one of my goals is to show that importance is always subjective, and that we are free to ignore any aspect of context that we have been conditioned to value (at school for example). I would agree that context can bring something that would interest me. In fact, my own analysis uses semantics, so it’s not context-free. That being said, anything beyond that (such as romanticism and biographic notes) is usually either (1) tangential to the content and colors it “cosmetically” (often in stereotypical ways), or (2) overloaded meaning that becomes its own (typically pompous) work of art. I therefore have a negative prejudice regarding those. I’m still open to “un-pure” analysis though (I call the process of accepting content outside the content “conventional medium delimitation”).

For my specific analysis of the Ode, someone else could certainly arrive at the same narrative. I’m curious to know the exact content of the course was, and would be happy to find a coinciding view (other analyses, for example, if you read the Wikipedia entry, don’t talk about the poem like that at all, and I think it’s true in general). The shorter the content, the greater the probability of coincidence. That being said, analysis of rhyme structure for example is tangential to that narrative. There is some work behind the reconstruction in terms of extracting what is essential to the narrative.

The purpose of extracting _medium-specific_ (emphasis on the latter) narratives is that it’s not that obvious depending on the work/reader (mainly due to our education), or totally unusual (music), and can lead to discoveries (or a way of discovering) that were (to me) groundbreaking. You may see it with other reconstructions. Luckily, since the first post, I’ve posted many reconstructions, so I think you’re in a great position to judge for yourself. I’m also now going to post reconstructions regularly.

I cannot PM you (probably because I’m new to the forum), and posting links is forbidden, but maybe you can PM me and I can reply to you ? Discussing things with more material would be great.

Thanks again for your curiosity and the great discussion
thaumasnot December 31, 2021 at 15:48 #637241
Reply to SatmBopd

To add to the previous post:

“Say if you're looking at romantic poets as a whole, and you're able to focus your analysis of their work on the things that they each do differently from each other, then aren't you extracting something more important or unique about each work?”

The reconstruction of a work is such that usually you’ll be able to extract something unique within the body of work of its author, let alone unique w.r.t. to other authors. It’s also very possible that this uniqueness hints at a signature (a template) that is unique to the author (or a period of their work), and this uniqueness is usually quite precise, at least much more precise than a vague term like “romanticism”. For example, you wouldn’t be able to mistake the medium-specific narrative of some Beethoven piece with any medium-specific narrative from other so-called “romantic” composers.
thaumasnot December 31, 2021 at 16:36 #637259
Reply to SatmBopd If you PM me, PM me with your email, since I may not be able to reply back.
Metaphysician Undercover January 01, 2022 at 13:39 #637586
Reply to thaumasnot

It appears like your project is to remove all human feeling and emotion from the review of an artistic piece, and analyze it as an AI would. You would look for patterns in the content, specific to the piece itself, limiting the meaning of "content" in that way, by disallowing that the content be related to anything external to the piece itself, in the production of interpretive "meaning". Is this a fair summary of what you are promoting?
thaumasnot January 01, 2022 at 14:09 #637589
Reply to Metaphysician Undercover

Yes, we look for patterns, patterns that have been ignored. While this yields a formal kind of review, it's not like an AI though, because in the last instance we're guided by personal inclinations when choosing the patterns. In fact, if anyone publishes a reconstruction, it’s probably because they found patterns they deemed remarkable. An essential difference from traditional reviews is that this personal inclination is implicit and not a focus, and the patterns are content that can be shared objectively and can ultimately lead to emotions (but this is not talked of, because it's something best left to the discretion of the reader IMO). My hope is to show patterns that are worth your while, but whether they are is yours to decide.
thaumasnot January 01, 2022 at 14:17 #637592
Reply to Metaphysician Undercover Another aspect I would like to emphasize, is that we're not "limiting" content, in the sense that we introduce a formal step to our interpretation called "conventional medium delimitation". Whatever context you might want to import is fair game. However, it is my personal experience that this context (including author, history, theme, and so on) are clichés that are boring to me and are inconsequential to the experiencing of the content. “Boring” is subjective of course, just like you could say my interpretations are boring. I will however try to offer something that may be worth your while. Since it's objective, you can observe it cleanly and rate it however you like, on a per-work basis.

The notion that context can be a boring cliché is developed further in the book, and is a big (but not essential) part of my critique of critique. One of my theses is that context has a special status w.r.t. to content, which has somewhat protected it from criticism, especially with regard to its importance and universal relevance. But this critique of context is also somewhat linked to the discovery of medium-specific narratives, as it relativizes the importance of context w.r.t. content. We haven't exhausted what content has to say, and it shows in many works. That's what reconstructions are here for, to bring awareness, and hopefully, some people agree it’s worth their time.
T_Clark January 01, 2022 at 19:38 #637642
Quoting thaumasnot
I would be glad to discuss the concept/project with you. In addition, I’m particularly looking for criticism about my writing (is it readable? is it logically sound? is it repeating something that already exists?). You can message me if you’re interested in reading the book or knowing more about the project, or we can discuss things here.


I'll start with this. You write very well. Clear and interesting. The ideas are well presented in a way that's easy to understand, although the ideas are not simple. And, no, this is not something that has been covered before. Interpretation is not a subject that gets addressed here much and it's one I'm really interested in, by which I mean I hate it. I'll provide a more nuanced discussion later if we get that far.

There's a term. Perhaps you know it - tl:dr, meaning too long, didn't read. Your post definitely qualifies. I almost didn't read it, but then I read the first couple of paragraphs and got sucked in. That's a testament to your writing, but also the subject. Did I mention I hate interpretation? Problem is, I don't know if you could have laid this out in a shorter post.

My post here relates just to the upfront part. I'm about a third of the way through the Manifesto. I'm determined to finish!!! When I do, I'll get back to you, today I hope.

One point I want to discuss is the difference between reviewing and interpretation. As I see it, they are not the same. I love a good review. You say they can be for information or pleasure, but they can be something more. A good review is an essay just as much as an article by Stephen Jay Gould, my favorite writer, on evolution. As Gould has written, a good review often starts with specifics, like bricks, and builds a wall. The specific to the general. I guess that's the mosaic you are talking about. It transmits ideas beyond just the specific subject being reviewed. Other good reviews have different ways of dealing with their subject, but they all give something more than just pleasure or information. More later I guess.

Good post. I'll try to keep up. Welcome to the forum. We need good writers and good thinkers.
T_Clark January 01, 2022 at 19:41 #637643
Reply to thaumasnot

I just noticed you started this a month ago. I guess I missed it. Or maybe I said, tl:dr and went back to reading one of the 5,000 threads about free will.
thaumasnot January 01, 2022 at 19:46 #637645
Reply to T Clark

“Pleasure” might not be the best term. I include a wide range of things in it, including “interesting viewpoints”, “nostalgia”, “writing style”, etc.

Thank you for the feedback, looking forward to any criticism ! And welcome to the discussion :)
thaumasnot January 01, 2022 at 20:01 #637647
Reply to T Clark

I do tend to conflate interpretation and reviewing. I’m not rigorous about it, so please bear with me.
T_Clark January 01, 2022 at 20:06 #637649
Quoting thaumasnot
I do tend to conflate interpretation and reviewing. I’m not rigorous about it, so please bear with me.


Don't apologize. Making distinctions is what we do here.
T_Clark January 01, 2022 at 21:55 #637688
Reply to thaumasnot

Ok. I've finished the manifesto and scanned the rest of the comments in the thread. First thought - I have my work cut out for me. Some homework to do. Do I want to do it? Yeeeesss? I'm lost on some concepts. I think that comes at least partly from the fact that I am not experienced in interpretation because of the whole hating thing, you know. And also because of my tendency to focus on the experience of art rather than the understanding of it. More on that later.

I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to come at this piecemeal. I'll comment on the manifesto from where I stand now. Then I'll need to go on with later posts in the thread and some of the homework you've provided.

Quoting thaumasnot
I just finished a book about “conceptual reconstructionism,”


At first, I thought you meant you had just finished reading it, but turns out you wrote it.

Quoting thaumasnot
Conceptual reconstructionism can be seen as a style of interpretation (of art and various other types of content) that consciously avoids value judgments and focuses on the “reconstruction” of works, which is the process of looking at (and transcribing) what I call their “medium-specific narratives.” The main motivation is a dissatisfaction with reviewing and analysis in general and how they fail to capture a certain uniqueness in certain works.


Some background - I am not a sophisticated art user. I enjoy music and visual art, but I don't have much of a musical or visual imagination. I am very verbal and have a vivid verbal imagination, so I'm much more at home in discussions of writing. I want to lay out my understanding of meaning in relation to works of art. I don't think they are particularly relevant to your subject, but I want to describe them briefly so you can see where I'm coming from. I don't expect to go on in that direction because I think it might sidetrack your thread, which I don't want to do. It's your job as the original poster to keep us on track. I'll try to help, or at least not to hurt.

I remember a fun trip to the Institute of Contemporary Art in Boston with a friend of mine, a visual artist. Lots to look at, most of it non-representational. I started a conversation with him about something I had been thinking about for a while. One of the museum guides came over and we had an interesting discussion. I laid out my thoughts - Art, of any sort, doesn't mean anything beyond the experience the viewer/reader gets from it. You can't turn art into words, even verbal art like poetry or literature. Interpretation, review, whatever you want to call it can only legitimately address the viewer's/reader's experience. Ok, enough of that. You at least to see how that colors my understanding of your views.

Quoting thaumasnot
Under careful examination, the description is a grab-bag of geographical, economical, political, cultural and demographical considerations which give rise to a mosaic. That is, it is based on juxtaposition rather than other types of relation (temporal order, cause-effect, deduction, formal similarity, etc.). It characteristically builds up into a familiar “messy” whole: while it is conventional and reads well, the mosaic typically doesn’t have a clear direction,


I love Wikipedia and the mosaic you are describing. It gives me just what I want. I'm your average user. I have specific types of information I'm generally looking for and it's good when I find it where I'm expecting to be. If I need to go further, which is not often, I'm capable of doing that on my own. From what you've written, I don't think you disagree with this.

Quoting thaumasnot
Consuming reviews and interpretations can be:

1. for information
2. for pleasure

The mosaic suits the consumption for information.


I commented on this in my first post. I agree that this isn't what I'm looking for in a review.

Quoting thaumasnot
In the context of the consumption for pleasure, we enjoy the work’s content united to the mosaic of interpretation, although the connection has a fundamentally conjectural quality. Take the live performance of a song. The enjoyment of the song is heightened by the belief in a certain connection to the musicians, the technicality of their performance, how they seem to enjoy themselves too, etc. Even if the connection is real, the conjecturing is always in the background: the audience always has to transcend a fundamental doubt, however small, regarding the connection (playback, autotune, whether the performance is that difficult to pull off, and so on).


You say "enjoyment," I say "experience." I think we're probably talking mostly about the same thing, although experience might include a bit more. I'm not sure. The factors you identify probably would contribute to the experience for me, although I think there would be lots of other factors. I probably won't be aware of them unless I'm really trying to understand my reactions to the piece.

Quoting thaumasnot
A notable labelling act is the value judgment. A statement such as “I like this work” is always a highly compromised abstraction of a rich experience. It tries to cram a more or less unique cognitive process into one quantity (informal or numerical, it doesn’t matter).


Sure, if value judgement is all there is. On the other hand, why would I interpret something that wasn't at least interesting? I write reviews on Amazon, Yelp, or Chowhound from time to time, almost all for things I have strong feelings about or interest in. I've been known to end a review with "I love this book."

Quoting thaumasnot
The interpretation of the average value doesn’t match the actual experiencing of content, which is a process with a narrative quality. Not narrative in the sense of a traditional story, but in a medium-specific sense. For example, if the medium is painting, a medium-specific narrative is based on visual perceptions (“events”) and how they relate to each other (through morphology, color, transformation, topology, etc.) on a timeline affixed to the viewer’s roaming gaze. Even in a text-based medium, a medium-specific narrative doesn’t always coincide with the traditional concept of story or plot. That’s because medium-specific specificity isn’t so much about what the words mean, but how they are told.


I'm interested in this, especially in media where I am not familiar with technical aspects. I know that bluegrass and old time country music sound and feel different, but what is it about them that makes that difference? For visual art, I'm even less knowledgeable about the technical aspects of the work. Even for written works where I am more comfortable, I am not usually paying attention to these aspects unless I make a special effort or unless someone points them out.

Quoting thaumasnot
The interpretation of the medium-specific narrative restores the granularity, temporality and epiphanic quality of content... Reconstruction is a product of the interpretation of the medium-specific narratives. It consists in transcribing a medium-specific narrative perceived in a work.


I'm trying to figure out what, exactly, this means. As I said, I think I have work to do.

Quoting thaumasnot
The interest of reconstruction is in pushing the scope of the perceived narrative to the physical boundaries of the medium.


I need to see some examples. I see you have provided at least one in later posts. That's the homework.

Quoting thaumasnot
Reconstruction is based on 2 conventions... Conventional medium delimitation... Pure referentiality


I don't understand. I will probably have more to say once I've read some examples.

Quoting thaumasnot
The mosaic, as a format of content, is just one symptom of amnesic thought processes that forget narrative relations, leading to a simplistic interpretation of information and reality, with unfortunate philosophical and cultural consequences like excessive vulgarization and false lifestyle dichotomies (for example, being a commercially successful mainstream artist versus staying “authentic” and underground). In particular, value-based interpretation creates artificial communication barriers that become social barriers. Role segregation is a consequence of the opacity of value judgments (e.g., a renowned critic’s opinion is unfalsifiable but considered authoritative), and feeds into an inferiority complex. It paints “great” artists as geniuses, and “great” critics as authority figures.


This gets at a question a lot of unsophisticated people like me have about art. Sure, the Mona Lisa is a nice painting about a pretty woman. What's so great about it. Or maybe - Hey, that's just a bunch of squiggles. My 3 year old son could do that. Maybe that's my problem with interpretation. I've read very few whose judgement matches my understanding, experience, of wonderfulness.

Quoting thaumasnot
With the focus of interpretation moving away from value judgments, not only do the critics lose all their privileges, but the gravity center of communities, now educated on on the sterile and manipulative aspects of value, shifts to the sharing of perceived content. Let me quote a random thread about a game on a gaming forum:


As I've written, you and I have a somewhat different opinion about value judgements, but I do know what you're talking about. I read a lot and spend a lot of time on Amazon. Amazon ratings and reviews of books are practically useless. Most books get 4.5 or 5 stars, even crap. Then some of my favorites, well written and meaningful, get 3.5 stars. If I want to see what's really going on with a book, I always read the 3 star reviews and then look for outside reviews from reputable sources.

Quoting thaumasnot
The focus on experiencing individual works and what makes each unique (as medium-specific narratives rather than consumerist novelties based on aesthetics, theme, and so on) directly contradicts the need for grand theories (what is Art, what is great Art, etc.). Reconstruction isn’t so much a theory as the cognitive process of finding medium-specific narratives.


Sounds good. That goal is similar to mine for focusing on the experience of a work of art rather than it's meaning. Sometimes in reading what you've written, I think maybe we are getting at something similar. Sometimes I think we are far apart.

See now, this is all tl:dr, but that's your fault, isn't it. I'll PM you to discuss.
thaumasnot January 01, 2022 at 22:35 #637708
Quoting T Clark
You can't turn art into words, even verbal art like poetry or literature. Interpretation, review, whatever you want to call it can only legitimately address the viewer's/reader's experience. Ok, enough of that.


We both lean toward the “experience”, so we’re practically on the same page. The only difference is that I don’t talk about “legitimacy”, and I don’t think this difference matters.

Quoting T Clark
Sure, if value judgement is all there is. On the other hand, why would I interpret something that wasn't at least interesting? I write reviews on Amazon, Yelp, or Chowhound from time to time, almost all for things I have strong feelings about or interest in. I've been known to end a review with "I love this book."


I also only interpret something I find interesting. The only difference is that I don’t try to articulate _why_ it matters to me (which is actually impossible because taste is not communicable), but the _what_, and this “what” happens to be objective, so we all win.

Quoting T Clark
I'm interested in this, especially in media where I am not familiar with technical aspects. I know that bluegrass and old time country music sound and feel different, but what is it about them that makes that difference?


The medium-specific narratives are genre-less (or cross-genre, if you will). They actually show music in a light that make genre/subgenre considerations pretty much worthless if you find value in medium-specific narratives (which is my case).

Quoting T Clark
I'm trying to figure out what, exactly, this means. As I said, I think I have work to do.


I don’t think so. This shows that I have a work to do. My goal is to reach people like you. I failed. I need to be clearer and provide examples.

Quoting T Clark

I need to see some examples. I see you have provided at least one in later posts. That's the homework.


Idem.

Quoting T Clark
This gets at a question a lot of unsophisticated people like me have about art. Sure, the Mona Lisa is a nice painting about a pretty woman. What's so great about it.


Actually, my goal is NOT to explain why this or that work is great. This is actually the contrary. My goal is to show content in a certain way that was overlooked and may actually the most important thing. In the case of Mona Lisa, I have actually nothing to report (for me it’s just straightforward artwork worthlessly hyped by interpretation and the context it brings with it).

Thank you for your valuable feedback, that was very useful, and shows where I should rewrite the Manifesto.
T_Clark January 01, 2022 at 23:29 #637743
Quoting thaumasnot
I also only interpret something I find interesting. The only difference is that I don’t try to articulate _why_ it matters to me (which is actually impossible because taste is not Ascommunicable), but the _what_, and this “what” happens to be objective, so we all win.


I'm not sure about this. I find that taste is one of the primary things I find meaningful and useful in a review. A good reviewer is trying to share his taste with me. Share, not impose. Sometimes it doesn't work, but when it does, it opens up a new way of seeing things. A new willingness to try things I haven't tried before. Some of my favorite reviews have been for restaurants, so the importance of taste can sometimes be literal.

Quoting thaumasnot
The medium-specific narratives are genre-less (or cross-genre, if you will). They actually show music in a light that make genre/subgenre considerations pretty much worthless if you find value in medium-specific narratives (which is my case).


I need to look at the examples you've provided to get a better idea of what you're talking about.

Quoting thaumasnot
Idem


I always use "ditto." "Idem" is classier.

Quoting thaumasnot
Actually, my goal is NOT to explain why this or that work is great. This is actually the contrary. My goal is to show content in a certain way that was overlooked and may actually the most important thing. In the case of Mona Lisa, I have actually nothing to report (for me it’s just straightforward artwork worthlessly hyped by interpretation and the context it brings with it).


I think you and I are talking about the same thing.
thaumasnot January 01, 2022 at 23:33 #637745
Quoting T Clark
I'm not sure about this. I find that taste is one of the primary things I find meaningful and useful in a review. A good reviewer is trying to share his taste with me. Share, not impose.


In my experience, the important bit is not the value judgment, but what (supposedly) leads to the value judgment. So if someone writes “I like because X”, X is actually the useful bit. That’s a big part of reconstructionism. The other big part, is what that X can be if you apply a certain discipline to the experiencing of the content (attention span and sensory memory).

Tom Storm January 02, 2022 at 00:10 #637759
Reply to thaumasnot Well written perspective but I confess it was long and detailed and I struggled to understand some of your specifics. But it's good to see this kind of content.

I've ususally drawn a distinction between criticism and reviewing.

A review lets us know how someone (the reviewer) felt about the quality of a work and why. I read film reviews to work out if I should go and see a specific film. Generally, people seem to decide upon which are their favourite reviewers and take their assessments more seriously than others. It's as much a relationship with the reviewer as anything else. In recent years it has been fashionable to hate on reviewers as gormless twats. Some people go to see every film that reviewer X hates - a kind of reverse recommendation.

In a review I don't want to know much about the work at all, just an overview of the themes, subject and cast and then some salient reasons why we should care (or not).

Criticism is different - it explores the work in depth and often will not make assessment about merit. It might explore some specific aspect of a work - for instance the use of native American myth and art in Kubrick's movie The Shining. Criticism helps us to see what we may not have seen without assistance. Some criticism might also explore why a work has been valued in the past and explore the various interpretations.

For my money the key fact about art is in the aesthetic experience - there is always a risk in analysis that such an enterprise may rob a work of its reason for being and miss the point. This process can be like people with no sense of humour trying to explain the punchline of a joke.

Generally however I want value judgements from my reviewing. It's the main reason I would read a review. From criticism, what I want is further information to enrich my understanding of a work. I think you are aiming at the latter.

T_Clark January 02, 2022 at 00:45 #637765
Quoting Tom Storm
For my money the key fact about art is in the aesthetic experience - there is always a risk in analysis that such an enterprise may rob a work of its reason for being and miss the point. This process can be like people with no sense of humour trying to explain the punchline of a joke.

Generally however I want value judgements from my reviewing. It's the main reason I would read a review. From criticism, what I want is further information to enrich my understanding of a work. I think you are aiming at the latter.


I think your and my desires and expectations for reviews and criticism are very similar. I'm trying to figure out how that fits into what @thaumasnot is aiming for.
Tom Storm January 02, 2022 at 01:00 #637769
Reply to T Clark It's a fascinating area and my most acrimonious discussions with others over the years have not involved religion or politics, but art and how it can be understood and assessed.

The OP seems to be working towards trying to capture the uniqueness in a work that may have been missed by conventional means of discussing works. I think this has merit. But to me this will often be a side dish to the main course. In some art what makes it 'unique' might be the least interesting aspect of that work.
T_Clark January 02, 2022 at 01:05 #637770
Quoting Tom Storm
It's a fascinating area and my most acrimonious discussions with others over the years have not involved religion or politics, but art and how it can be understood and assessed.


I can get all the political arguments I want, but I have nobody to talk art with, so I'm enjoying this.

Quoting Tom Storm
The OP seems to be working towards trying to capture the uniqueness in a work that may have been missed by conventional means of discussing works. I think this has merit. But to me this will often be a side dish to the main course. In some art what makes it 'unique' might be the least interesting aspect of that work.


I'm not sure. At times it feels like @thaumasnot and I are talking about the same things. At others, like we're nowhere near each other.

Hey, @Noble Dust, we's talkin about aht. thought you might be interested.
T_Clark January 02, 2022 at 05:21 #637813
Reply to thaumasnot

Your conceptual reconstruction of Ode on a Grecian Urn is what I expected from what you described. I can see the value and agree it might be helpful, especially after I read the poem once. It's the kind of explication I never would have done for myself. It reminds me of several posts that @Michael Zwingli put together for some of the poetry we exchanged. Michael, are you still around?

I remember reading an interpretation of "Wild Grapes" by Robert Frost that I found really interesting. Two sets of lines referenced Greek mythology:

[i]The day I swung suspended with the grapes,
And was come after like Eurydice
And brought down safely from the upper regions;[/i]

and

[i]Where a white birch he knew of stood alone,
Wearing a thin head-dress of pointed leaves,
And heavy on her heavy hair behind,
Against her neck, an ornament of grapes.[/i]

And another which referenced Leif Erikson's foster father:

[i]Bunches all round me growing in white birches,
The way they grew round Leif the Lucky's German;[/i]

The essay, which I have not been able to find again, explained the references. I found that really satisfying. It increased my depth of understanding of the poem.

But what you wrote here seems different from what you posted at the links you sent me.
thaumasnot January 02, 2022 at 08:49 #637841
Quoting Tom Storm
Well written perspective but I confess it was long and detailed and I struggled to understand some of your specifics. But it's good to see this kind of content.


Hello, welcome to the discussion :) Thanks for your feedback. If there’s any passage you specifically struggled to understand, please tell me where it is and I’ll try to improve it.

Your distinction between review and criticism is fair, I think. That being said, the Manifesto also addresses this brand of criticism (the “too much, not enough” syndrome), though it’s possible that criticism partially coincides with reconstruction (as @SatmBopd pointed out).
thaumasnot January 02, 2022 at 09:07 #637847
Quoting Tom Storm
The OP seems to be working towards trying to capture the uniqueness in a work that may have been missed by conventional means of discussing works. I think this has merit. But to me this will often be a side dish to the main course. In some art what makes it 'unique' might be the least interesting aspect of that work.


Yes. That said, a part of the thesis is that there are different types of uniqueness. It’s of course (at least to me personally) not very interesting to mention that a work is unique because of things like “it’s a novel without a single punctuation”. Reconstruction is only of the medium-specific narrative. The narrative aspect stresses not details/aspects in isolation, but how they are leveraged within a composition, how they fit together. I would certainly be curious to know what your stance would be after being exposed to reconstructions. The reason is that IMO if there’s any such thing as a “main course” in interpretation, the medium-specific narrative is the most natural candidate to be it. That’s because it’s a structure that ties the whole work together as a holistic unit in a way that is concrete and detailed.
thaumasnot January 02, 2022 at 09:27 #637853
Quoting T Clark
Your conceptual reconstruction of Ode on a Grecian Urn is what I expected from what you described. I can see the value and agree it might be helpful, especially after I read the poem once.


That’s cool to hear ! Sometimes, it will not be as helpful. It can depend on the content or the reader. Not every content is interesting to reconstruct for every reader. The project is to offer reconstructions that people are free to judge. Hopefully one will open the eyes of some person to the wonders of medium-specific narratives. Reconstruction in itself is nothing. It’s just a tool to open eyes, and once it works, we can forget it, because the only thing in it that matters is the cognitive approach that it suggests.

Quoting T Clark
But what you wrote here seems different from what you posted at the links you sent me.


It’s fundamentally the same thing, except that I use the special markup notation for various reasons (concision, and forcing readers out of their comfort zone). It will probably appear more technical, but it’s just the syntax. For Ode on a Grecian Urn, it was okay to use an informal language, but I think you’ll agree that as the narrative gets bigger, it becomes more and more tedious to mention the narrative links again and again, so we need some mnemonic convention to keep things practical (for the writer and the reader).

The form of a reconstruction also depends on the medium. In the reconstruction of painting or movies, I will use a lot of images to show what the terms of the reconstruction exactly refer to (in fact, since it’s so graphical, reconstructions of paintings and movies might be the most convenient and pleasurable to read). For literature, I will quote the text a lot.
Tom Storm January 02, 2022 at 10:57 #637871
Quoting thaumasnot
I would certainly be curious to know what your stance would be after being exposed to reconstructions.


I'd have to see an example in action. Much of what you write is highly complex and I am not sure I understand your intent.

For instance, I don't understand this:

Quoting thaumasnot
Reconstruction is only of the medium-specific narrative. The narrative aspect stresses not details/aspects in isolation, but how they are leveraged within a composition, how they fit together.


I don't understand this paragraph:

Quoting thaumasnot
. The cliché is informative, but a cliché nonetheless. It has a characteristic quality of contingency that makes you question how essential it really is to enjoyment. You can, as a mind game, attribute various authors to the content, and see that it works the same way as when the “real” author is involved: the chosen author colors the work uniquely, but its impact on our experiencing of the content (as opposed to the appreciation of its meaning and context) is limited and diffuse. I call this method of assessing the relative merits of conjecturing the inconsequential conjecture test. It can be applied to any feature of the mosaic, including meaning, historical significance, virtuosity, emotionality, etc.


On reflection, what I tend to enjoy most is reading how a critic's tastes and views interacted with the text, rather than an attempt at objectivist understanding. I like it best when a critic has an angle on something I hadn't considered. I like celebrations of taste and personal experience - as long as the reviewer has a good mind and a rich command of language. So I may not be of any use to you

I went through the 1980's reading a lot of film crit and literary crit theory - none of it helped me much. But I did love film reviews written by Pauline Kael.
thaumasnot January 02, 2022 at 10:59 #637872
Reply to Tom Storm Sending you a PM.
thaumasnot January 02, 2022 at 11:21 #637874
Quoting Tom Storm
I don't understand this paragraph


I’ll rewrite it. What it says is basically that when a review/criticism is not taken as just being informative (in which case there is nothing to criticize), we can subject it to the same judgment criteria that we use to judge the content. For example, we can criticize something they say for being cliché (speaking about the author for example), or for being inconsequential (for example, they explain why a certain thing is there in a painting, and that thing doesn’t matter at all to how we experience the content).
T_Clark January 02, 2022 at 16:50 #637932
Quoting Tom Storm
I'd have to see an example in action. Much of what you write is highly complex and I am not sure I understand your intent.


I've asked the moderators if I could post a link to @thaumasnot's webpage so others can see what he's done. I don't want to piss anyone off or get anyone into trouble.
thaumasnot January 02, 2022 at 16:51 #637933
Hi T Clark,

I’ve PM’ed you a proposal. I sent Tom the links, he doesn’t see the point of the reconstructions, and that’s fine. It’s a very novel thing, it will take time to sink in.
Tom Storm January 02, 2022 at 21:48 #638014
Reply to T Clark I had a look at the reconstructions, they weren't of any use to me. See how you go.
Metaphysician Undercover January 03, 2022 at 01:30 #638090
Quoting thaumasnot
Yes, we look for patterns, patterns that have been ignored. While this yields a formal kind of review, it's not like an AI though, because in the last instance we're guided by personal inclinations when choosing the patterns. In fact, if anyone publishes a reconstruction, it’s probably because they found patterns they deemed remarkable. An essential difference from traditional reviews is that this personal inclination is implicit and not a focus, and the patterns are content that can be shared objectively and can ultimately lead to emotions (but this is not talked of, because it's something best left to the discretion of the reader IMO). My hope is to show patterns that are worth your while, but whether they are is yours to decide.


So I don't really understand where the "reconstruction" comes from. Let's take a simple pattern for example. Suppose a piece of music has a rhythm, a beat, and this you choose as a medium-specific narrative. So you might go through the whole piece and determine what parts are the fundamental rhythm, and what parts are variations, or maybe some parts are even completely different. That's an analysis, but where does the reconstruction come into play? How would a reconstruction differ from an analysis? What am I missing?
thaumasnot January 03, 2022 at 08:35 #638168
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
So you might go through the whole piece and determine what parts are the fundamental rhythm, and what parts are variations, or maybe some parts are even completely different. That's an analysis, but where does the reconstruction come into play? How would a reconstruction differ from an analysis? What am I missing?


If we take your example, the reconstruction would be like: rhythm accelerates a little, rhythm slows down big, rhythm sustains etc. Even though it’s not interesting, it’s different from analysis in that reconstruction transcribes variations almost transparently. It makes no effort to add value to the content (except try to be readable and not too tedious). It won’t even try to categorize the piece. In practice, it will rather apply to melody (not harmony), more precisely the motifs. It will transcribe how patterns arise from correlating melodic structures. This is already unusual (not unique, of course), but it will take that approach further by looking at piece-wide networks of correlations. The content that is reconstructed also kind of matters. Some pieces arguably lend themselves better than others to that approach. I have a certain experience in this area that can be interesting to some.
Metaphysician Undercover January 03, 2022 at 13:14 #638205
Quoting thaumasnot
Even though it’s not interesting, it’s different from analysis in that reconstruction transcribes variations almost transparently. It makes no effort to add value to the content (except try to be readable and not too tedious).


Isn't that exactly what analysis is though, to break something down into its parts, in an objective way? This is to make the divisions in accordance with what is inherent within the piece, rather than according to some values. It is synthesis, when we put the parts back together (reconstruction), which is necessarily guided by values. We cannot "reconstruct" in a manner which is not value-driven because the end, or goal, of the reconstruction must be chosen, and it acts as a guide in the reconstructing activity.

Quoting thaumasnot
It won’t even try to categorize the piece. In practice, it will rather apply to melody (not harmony), more precisely the motifs. It will transcribe how patterns arise from correlating melodic structures. This is already unusual (not unique, of course), but it will take that approach further by looking at piece-wide networks of correlations.


So I think the issue is these "correlations". This is how the parts are supposed to be related to each other. An artist will proceed with a very unique, peculiar, or even mysterious idiolect, or way of correlating parts in general. Let's say that the reconstructionist breaks down the parts, and starts to describe a correlation of parts, attributing this correlation to the artist. How does the reconstructionist know that these correlations are the ones produced by the artist, rather than ones created by the synthesis (complete with inherent intention and values) of the reconstructionist?
thaumasnot January 03, 2022 at 14:45 #638219
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Isn't that exactly what analysis is though, to break something down into its parts, in an objective way? This is to make the divisions in accordance with what is inherent within the piece, rather than according to some values. It is synthesis, when we put the parts back together (reconstruction), which is necessarily guided by values. We cannot "reconstruct" in a manner which is not value-driven because the end, or goal, of the reconstruction must be chosen, and it acts as a guide in the reconstructing activity.


That’s true. If analysis only quotes the content (guided by value-based predilections) for the purpose of extracting a medium-specific narrative (so in our case, a network of melodic motifs), it is fundamentally the same as reconstruction. You could maybe say reconstruction is a subset of analysis. I will usually oppose them, but that may be an abuse of language.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
How does the reconstructionist know that these correlations are the ones produced by the artist, rather than ones created by the synthesis (complete with inherent intention and values) of the reconstructionist?


As you said, the reconstructionist is guided by values, and reconstructionism is essentially hedonistic, it makes no claim of being right. On the contrary, even though it sticks to the content like a dog to his bone, it isn’t at all about being right (cf. Manifesto). To summarize, what’s subjective is the choice of these correlations. What’s objective is the quoted content and the correlations. These are formal correlations by the way: transpositions, inversion, repetition, scaling, and so on.
T_Clark January 03, 2022 at 20:53 #638317
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
So I don't really understand where the "reconstruction" comes from. Let's take a simple pattern for example. Suppose a piece of music has a rhythm, a beat, and this you choose as a medium-specific narrative. So you might go through the whole piece and determine what parts are the fundamental rhythm, and what parts are variations, or maybe some parts are even completely different. That's an analysis, but where does the reconstruction come into play? How would a reconstruction differ from an analysis? What am I missing?


The questions you are asking are the same sorts of ones I have.
T_Clark January 03, 2022 at 21:08 #638325
Quoting thaumasnot
Even though it’s not interesting, it’s different from analysis in that reconstruction transcribes variations almost transparently. It makes no effort to add value to the content (except try to be readable and not too tedious).


I think this gets at the heart of my questions. Why would I want to look at the reconstruction of the work of art if it's not telling me something interesting. That's what I'm looking for, someone who maybe knows a bit more than I do to pick out parts of the work that contribute to the effect it has. There are so many ways you can break down a work - word counts, uses of figures of speech, rhythm and rhyme, symbols, references to other works, references to mythology... and on an on.

That brings up another question, which is especially important to me for media I am not familiar with. What standards are you applying? I don't know what "verticality" or "convexity" mean, represent, or imply with visual art. It's a language I'm not familiar with. Is it yours or is it a standard way of analyzing that type of work. I think it would help if you provide a written summary at the beginning for each type of work of art that describes the classification methods and standards, where they come from, and what they signify.

A specific question for "As I Lay Dying," the only work other than "Ode on a Grecian Urn" I am familiar with. All the other works are short or, like the photograph, all one thing. "As I Lay Dying" is long and you've only presented a few analyses of the text. Are the ways of analyzing you've provided intended to be exhaustive? Does that cover all the aspects of the writing it's worth looking at?

As @Metaphysician Undercover noted, I'm not really sure how these differ from an ordinary analysis, even after I read your response.
jgill January 03, 2022 at 21:09 #638326
This eerily reminds me of Alexandre's paper. A breakthrough in perspective, this time not in physics but art and literature.
thaumasnot January 03, 2022 at 21:21 #638335
Quoting T Clark
I think this gets at the heart of my questions. Why would I want to look at the reconstruction of the work of art if it's not telling me something interesting.


I said it was not interesting if we use rhythm as the basis for a reconstruction. It goes without saying that I wouldn’t want to write a reconstruction if it wasn’t interesting.

Quoting T Clark
That brings up another question, which is especially important to me for media I am not familiar with. What standards are you applying? I don't know what "verticality" or "convexity" mean, represent, or imply with visual art.


Good question. “Verticality” or “convexity” are used as referential terms. You point to a weakness in my approach, as I didn’t mention that you have to look at the following annotated picture to find what these terms refer to. Other terms could have been chosen. “Verticality” was chosen because it’s the geometrical property I want to emphasize. And so on. The exact choice of term is not the most important part, it’s the referentiality, but the choice of term needs to be intuitive enough to make the reading comfortable.

Quoting T Clark
All the other works are short or, like the photograph, all one thing. "As I Lay Dying" is long and you've only presented a few analyses of the text. Are the ways of analyzing you've provided intended to be exhaustive? Does that cover all the aspects of the writing it's worth looking at?


No, of course not. The reconstruction is one narrative carefully selected to represent the content (it doesn’t make the claim that it’s the best way, it would non-sensical to try to claim that). Exhaustivity is more the domain of the mosaic of the interpretation of the average value (cf. Manifesto).
thaumasnot January 03, 2022 at 21:54 #638350
Quoting jgill
This eerily reminds me of Alexandre's paper. A breakthrough in perspective, this time not in physics but art and literature.


I don’t know if it’s a breakthrough, but I do know it’s much more difficult to get my points across than I expected.
Metaphysician Undercover January 04, 2022 at 02:21 #638435
Quoting thaumasnot
As you said, the reconstructionist is guided by values, and reconstructionism is essentially hedonistic, it makes no claim of being right. On the contrary, even though it sticks to the content like a dog to his bone, it isn’t at all about being right (cf. Manifesto). To summarize, what’s subjective is the choice of these correlations. What’s objective is the quoted content and the correlations. These are formal correlations by the way: transpositions, inversion, repetition, scaling, and so on.


I don't see that you have any claim to objectivity. Content is inherently subjective, the subject matter. The artist chooses the medium so the medium is subjective. The only way that art approaches objectivity is through the form, the correlations which the artist employs. A semblance of objectivity is obtained if the artist can use these correlations to achieve some sort of meaning or aesthetic value in a universal way.

If you strip the piece down to its most subjective level, and reconstruct, then all you are doing is creating a new level of subjectivity by removing any semblance of objectivity which the piece might have had in the first place. Even if you leave in place some of the "formal correlations", by changing others you are allowing your own subjectivity to invade the objective aspect.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 08:56 #638511
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
If you strip the piece down to its most subjective level


I’m not sure where I “strip down the piece down to its most subjective level” ? There must be some misunderstanding here.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Even if you leave in place some of the "formal correlations", by changing others you are allowing your own subjectivity to invade the objective aspect.


By “changing others”, do you mean “changing other correlations” ? Then I’m not sure where you come from, since I’m not changing anything.

The best way to eliminate any ambiguity about what we mean (the most useful definition of objectivity for me is Karl Popper’s, which equates it to “interpersonal subjectivity”, but if you don’t agree, I can use “interpersonal subjectivity” instead of “objectivity”) is by looking at an example. Let’s assume a reconstruction of music starts as follows:

“The music starts with a motif M (0:2 to 0:8)” that gets repeated in the next phrase (0:10 to 0:18).”

The music is “quoted” and a correlation (the repetititon) is noted. What is not objective for you here ?
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 09:49 #638523
I wonder how you can reconstruct a work. Reconstructing means pulling a work out of its context and give it a new, seemingly objective new context of apparently objective measures. Isn't that exactly what you do? Every claim to objectivity, is a claim to subjectively assigned values of importance. The same is done in scientific reconstructions. An old theory is put under the microscope of modern day claims of objectivity.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 10:00 #638524
Quoting Raymond
Every claim to objectivity, is a claim to subjectively assigned values of importance.


I think it would be more productive if we frame this discussion with a concrete example, as I told Metaphysician Undercover:

Quoting thaumasnot
Let’s assume a reconstruction of music starts as follows:

“The music starts with a motif M (0:2 to 0:8)” that gets repeated in the next phrase (0:10 to 0:18).”

The music is “quoted” and a correlation (the repetititon) is noted. What is not objective for you here ?


If by "a claim to subjectively assigned values of importance", you mean that it's subjective that I picked the motif M and this correlation, then absolutely. There's no debate here. I'm saying that the reconstruction is objective only in the fact that M does exist, and so does the repetition of M.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 10:02 #638525
Quoting thaumasnot
think it would be more productive if we frame this discussion with a concrete example, as I told Metaphysician Undercover:


That's exactly what I wanted to propose! :wink:
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 10:07 #638526
Quoting thaumasnot
Let’s assume a reconstruction of music starts as follows:

“The music starts with a motif M (0:2 to 0:8)” that gets repeated in the next phrase (0:10 to 0:18).”

The music is “quoted” and a correlation (the repetititon) is noted. What is not objective for you here ?


It's objective if we both agree to reconstruct the piece in the language of "motives", "contrapoints", or other terms of classical music. Isn't the record itself the best reconstruction?
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 10:10 #638527
What's the essence of a piece of music? The decomposition of the soundwaves? Then maybe the most objective way is using Fourier transforms piecewise.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 10:11 #638528
Quoting Raymond
It's objective if we both agree to reconstruct the piece in the language of "motives", "contrapoints", or other terms of classical music. Isn't the record itself the best reconstruction?


Yes it is. That's why in the Manifesto I wrote that reconstruction is not a substitute for the content, just a guide.

We reconstruct an abstraction of the work (hence "conceptual" reconstructionism) to help the consumer of the content re-focus on the content. Consumption of content tends to be distracted by a million factors (for example, the search for meaning and context), that's where reconstruction comes in.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 10:13 #638529
Quoting Raymond
What's the essence of a piece of music? The decomposition of the soundwaves? Then maybe the most objective way is using Fourier transforms piecewise.


Reconstructionism isn't a theory about what is essential (or a theory at all). It is hedonistic : we look for a perspective that will provide enjoyment.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 10:16 #638530
Quoting thaumasnot
We reconstruct an abstraction of the work (hence "conceptual" reconstructionism) to help the consumer of the content re-focus on the content. Consumption of content tends to be distracted by a million factors (for example, the search for meaning and context), that's where reconstruction comes in.


I see. That's clear. But how to determine the concepts? Suppose I look at the New York Boogie Woogie painting, by Mondriaan? What would be the concepts? Should I ignore the title? Or the atmosphere in New York?
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 10:21 #638531
Quoting thaumasnot
It is hedonistic : we look for a perspective that will provide enjoyment.


That's shining a nice light! So it's an aid for the beholder. Not throwing in useless context info, but concentrating on the piece "as it is"?

thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 10:22 #638533
Quoting Raymond
But how to determine the concepts? Suppose I look at the New York Boogie Woogie painting, by Mondriaan? What would be the concepts? Should I ignore the title? Or the atmosphere in New York?


If you start anew, the process of determining the concepts will be empirical. In my case, I found something in some medium-specific narratives. Reconstruction is for sharing them with others.

For your specific questions (should I ignore the title?), you can test out empirically how that improves your enjoyment. In my manifesto, I refer to this as "conventional medium delimitation". You decide what is the content, and then you analyze it.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 10:25 #638534
Quoting Raymond
That's shining a nice light! So it's an aid for the beholder. Not throwing in useless context info, but concentrating on the piece "as it is"?


Exactly. And I believe it's surprising how far that can go, when you don't look for meaning and context at every turn. Just let the medium do its work. But you have to help it if you want to maximize it. Reconstruction helps with that.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 10:34 #638539
That's a nice approach. I think I even use it myself, when listening to music. Beside the emotions and crazy dances I sometimes dance, I discover new pieces of guitar, drum patterns I didn't notice before, bass lines repeating, or whatever. Is that the stuff you write about? Sounds like a discovery tour somehow! Great!
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 10:40 #638540
Quoting Raymond
That's a nice approach. I think I even use it myself, when listening to music. Beside the emotions and crazy dances I sometimes dance, I discover new pieces of guitar, drum patterns I didn't notice before, bass lines repeating, or whatever. Is that the stuff you write about? Sounds like a discovery tour somehow! Great!


Yes, that's the kind of stuff. Reusing this reconstruction "The music starts with a motif M (0:2 to 0:8)” that gets repeated in the next phrase (0:10 to 0:18)", what happens if we continue to unfold the network of relationships throughout the whole piece? That's the experiment.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 10:46 #638542
Quoting T Clark
I don't know what "verticality" or "convexity" mean, represent, or imply with visual art


Don't tell me you don't know that in abstract painting most trees stand vertical and their leaves are convex. Same for realistic work. Vertical, up-down linearly, convex, spherical.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 10:48 #638543
Quoting thaumasnot
That's the experiment.


Sounds exciting. Could we discover elements the artist wasn't aware of?
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 10:48 #638544
Quoting Raymond
Don't tell me you don't know that in abstract painting most trees stand vertical and their leaves are convex. Same for realistic work. Vertical, up-down linearly, convex, spherical.


Just thanks.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 10:50 #638545
Quoting Raymond
Could we discover elements the artist wasn't aware of?


Possibly yes. (But to be fair, that's not specific to the reconstructionist method. An artist can read a traditional interpretation of their work, and roll their eyes.)
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 10:58 #638548
Reply to thaumasnot

As a matter of fact, you made me turn on some music! It looks like a soundscape to be discovered. Still... What should an objective conceptual reconstruction look like (I haven't read all your work yet)? Does our mind logically reconstruct somehow? New pattern seems to "click" into existence somehow. What pieces of sound are objective properties?
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 11:04 #638552
Quoting Raymond
New pattern seems to "click" into existence somehow. What pieces of sound are objective properties?


For reconstruction, it's mostly about melodic structure. For example, phrases, or segments within the phrases. There's a certain grammar we all perceive, and that helps us organize what would otherwise be chaos.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 11:09 #638555
Quoting Raymond
What pieces of sound are objective properties?


A very basic one would be relative position of notes (whether note is higher or lower than another note). This is constantly used in reconstructions.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 11:22 #638561
Reply to thaumasnot

But where "reconstruction" refers to? By the way, the music I listen to:

Construction time again

thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 11:32 #638562
Do you mean you want to reconstruct the song? My method is to memorize the shape of the melodies as the music plays (doesn't have to be perfect). When a phrase happens, I compare it to previously encountered melodies in the song, and correlate motifs within them. This process is reiterated in real-time until the end of the song. A medium-specific narrative thus emerges, and if I find it great, I will write it down. Note that it can take many listens, because it's not always easy to memorize, especially with complex pieces like in classical music, and it requires an attention span that is not compatible with our "instant consumption" (or fast-food consumption, if you will) tendencies. I have a lot of experience, so it helps. Of course, whether the resulting medium-specific narrative is rewarding depends on your experience/value system, and the song. No amount of reconstruction will make a song sound great if its medium-specific narrative isn't.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 12:20 #638576
Reply to thaumasnot

I posted the song, the album, because the title was appropiate: (re)"Construction time again". How to reconstruct that?

What you mean by medium specific narrative? Stories told about different media used in art, or other traditions? In science there exists logical reconstruction. Are yours and this similar somehow? Both are reconstructions.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 12:25 #638577
Quoting Raymond
What you mean by medium specific narrative?


Have you read the Manifesto? This would save me from repeating myself.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 12:32 #638580
Quoting thaumasnot
Have you read the Manifesto?


Not all of it. I'll try to find it.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 12:48 #638591
Quoting thaumasnot
The mosaic is predisposed to distract from the content, as if through centrifugal force. Reviewing is known to relate to the content in the following ways:

* Description for the blind or deaf (for example, enumerating the instruments in a musical piece, or, if there’s a tree in a painting, saying, with style, that there’s a tree)
* Analysis “through the microscope”, that is, features of the mosaic are individually looked at in detail (for example, the rhyming structure of a poem, or the references and historical context of a painting)
* Myopic overviews, mostly in the form of categorizations (for example, categorizing a Beethoven piece as Romantic-era classical music)


We could give a mosaic of essential features, without being myopic, blind or deaf, or analyzing through a microscope. But who determines what parts of the piece are mosaic parts? Can this be determined objectively, as well as communicated objectively? The work that is conceptually reconstructed has to be looked at in an a priori defined manner. Somehow, your theory reminds me of the scientific approach to reality, where empiricism plays a role.

I will try to come up with a narrative for a painting. The narrative, by definition, has to be spoken or written or spoken. Or can we give a visual narrative of music, and a sound narrative of a painting?
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 13:19 #638606
Quoting Raymond
But who determines what parts of the piece are mosaic parts?


It's a mix of convention, habits, utility. Cf. intro paragraphs.

Quoting Raymond
The work that is conceptually reconstructed has to be looked at in an a priori defined manner. Somehow, your theory reminds me of the scientific approach to reality, where empiricism plays a role.


It's basically the hedonistic thing.

Quoting Raymond
I will try to come up with a narrative for a painting. The narrative, by definition, has to be spoken or written or spoken. Or can we give a visual narrative of music, and a sound narrative of a painting?


It's described further down in the Manifesto.
T_Clark January 04, 2022 at 16:46 #638683
Quoting Raymond
Don't tell me you don't know that in abstract painting most trees stand vertical and their leaves are convex. Same for realistic work. Vertical, up-down linearly, convex, spherical.


Yes, I know what the words mean, but not in the context they are being used. I don't know their significance, why we should be paying attention to them.
Raymond January 04, 2022 at 17:03 #638690
Reply to T Clark Quoting T Clark
don't know their significance, why we should be paying attention to them.


In Mondriaan's depiction of the man and the wife, only two orthogonal black lines are used, horizontally and vertically. The frame is rotated 45 degrees. If we conceptually reconstruct it, we need to use verticallity only. The painting is conceptually reconstructed:

-Two black lines, one vertically, Man, one antivertically, Woman.
-Woman and Man shake the boundaries. The house containing them ain't big enough for the both of them.
-Man and Woman push each other into the corner, mutually orthogonal.
-Convexity is absent.

Can we apply verticallity to poetry or music?
T_Clark January 04, 2022 at 17:06 #638695
Quoting Raymond
Can we apply verticallity to poetry or music?


You seem to have a better grasp on what's going on here than I do.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 17:12 #638698
Quoting T Clark
Yes, I know what the words mean, but not in the context they are being used. I don't know their significance, why we should be paying attention to them.


That's the sort of things the other thread was about.
thaumasnot January 04, 2022 at 17:18 #638701
Quoting Raymond
The painting is conceptually reconstructed


Do you have a link to the painting?
Metaphysician Undercover January 05, 2022 at 01:21 #638893
Quoting thaumasnot
The music is “quoted” and a correlation (the repetititon) is noted. What is not objective for you here ?


As I said, the content, and the medium itself, is inherently subjective, as it is chosen by the artist. This choice is the very base of a subjective expression which is the artistic expression. The choice of medium is the subjective base.

To quote the piece is simply to copy it. When you copy it, it is not your creation but someone else's, so you can create the impression of objectivity, by showing that it's something which can be copied, i.e. it has objective existence. The piece itself remains inherently subjective, freely created by a subject. To have an objective copy would be to copy it exactly as it was composed. But you choose not to copy, you choose to reconstruct. So you do not end up with an objective copy, you end up with a subjective reconstruction, which you claim is based in some kind of objectivity. It isn't though, because you do not copy the piece you only choose which parts you want to copy. So I don't think you should represent this style of interpretation as any more objective than any other style. It is a different style, but there appears to be nothing in your principles which would make it objective.
thaumasnot January 05, 2022 at 08:05 #638968
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
So I don't think you should represent this style of interpretation as any more objective than any other style. It is a different style, but there appears to be nothing in your principles which would make it objective.


If we want to really nitpick, here are exact quotes relevant to our exchange:

Quoting thaumasnot
Works are reconstructed in objective, constructive terms

Quoting thaumasnot
What’s objective is the quoted content and the correlations.


So I’m not claiming exactly that reconstruction is objective. From a very strict reading of this, you could say that “What’s objective is the quoted content and the correlations” is not true, but reader with a pragmatic mind would just guess that what I meant is that the quote and the correlations can be verified.

So yeah, we agree. Reconstruction is not objective in an absolute sense, and I don’t care, this was never the point. I only care that people can relate it to the content without ambiguity.
Metaphysician Undercover January 05, 2022 at 12:47 #639036
Reply to thaumasnot
I\m trying to grasp what the point to this style of interpretation is. It's a complex system without any real value scheme. Doesn't that leave it worthless? See if you can answer this question for me. What is the overarching goal behind this reconstruction system? Is the goal to produce good quality interpretations, as reconstructions, or is the goal to produce a complex formal system of interpretation?

Take a look at it this way for example. There is a relationship between any particular reconstruction and the original piece which is chosen. Is that a relationship of value? So we might say that if an interpretation adds something to the original it is a good interpretation, and if it takes something away from the original, it is a bad interpretation. And we could judge the interpretation as good or bad because it has some value for the person trying to experience the full affect of the original.

If there is no value in this relationship, then the reconstruction just exists in some parallel relation, and we have to ask what is the purpose in producing it. Then it might turn out that this is just a meaningless practice of following some principles, as a hedonistic self-indulgence, with no real purpose except to be the recipient of the gratification derived from having followed the principles. If this is the case, then the challenge is to build the system, creating a more and more complex system, making it increasingly difficult to follow, thereby increasing the gratification received from having followed it.
Raymond January 05, 2022 at 15:14 #639069
Raymond January 05, 2022 at 15:23 #639074
Reply to T Clark

It depends how the poem is looked at, as all things. A vertical poem seems militant, aggressive, or coming at ya. It won't bow, it's strict and reaches for heaven. To be read in staccato.
A convex poem is modest, resilient, and inviting. Written with a lot of vowels, spoken with round lips.

You can imagine what the horizonal and ellipsoid poems hold in store for us.
T_Clark January 05, 2022 at 17:24 #639135
Quoting Raymond
You can imagine what the horizonal and ellipsoid poems hold in store for us.


If those metaphors work for you, that's good. If you hadn't explained them, I probably wouldn't have known what you were trying to say. Those are probably not words I would use to describe poetry.
Raymond January 05, 2022 at 18:38 #639169
Reply to T Clark

It are just words. Like hyperbolic, circular, linear, square, harmonic, spherical, tangent, projective, isomorph, injective, stochastic, conic, fractal, invertible, chaotic, infinitesimal, differentiable, continuous (a continuous poem need not be a differentiable one, while a differentiable poem is always a continuous one), singular, regular, particular (not to be confused with a singular poem), integrable, etc. You name it Or you don't, as seems to be the case, and you are allowed. It's an efficient way though to communicate a conceptual reconstruction of a poem in a strict, objective, consistent, effective, and unambiguous directive. No further questions to be asked. Like nature can unambiguously be captured by math, so can poems. Effectively reasonable.
thaumasnot January 06, 2022 at 11:11 #639390
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
I\m trying to grasp what the point to this style of interpretation is. It's a complex system without any real value scheme. Doesn't that leave it worthless? See if you can answer this question for me. What is the overarching goal behind this reconstruction system? Is the goal to produce good quality interpretations, as reconstructions, or is the goal to produce a complex formal system of interpretation?


In a vacuum, a reconstruction is worthless. Let's use this example again:

"The music starts with a motif M (0:2 to 0:8) that gets repeated in the next phrase (0:10 to 0:18)."

Those are observations that anyone can make. While this is true, there is value because:

* People tend to NOT listen making these kinds of observations, don't care about patterns and correlations, etc. They're distracted by other factors, including emotion, aesthetics, immediate sensations
* It's hard to apply the same discipline of observation over a whole song. The reconstruction, as a whole, helps to conceptualize a wide narrative resulting from correlating many observations distributed throughout the song.

So what is the goal ? To provide a guide to consumption that can improve sensations/enjoyment. The payoff is different when you follow the guide (or more precisely listen to the song like the guide suggests) from when you listen to the song casually or interpret it along different axes of analysis (represented by the mosaic defined in the Manifesto). The nature of this improvement has other benefits listed in the Manifesto, including social (cf. section "social and cognitive impact of reconstruction").

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Take a look at it this way for example. There is a relationship between any particular reconstruction and the original piece which is chosen. Is that a relationship of value?


It has value only relative to the reader/listener, as a helper.
thaumasnot January 06, 2022 at 11:31 #639396
Quoting Raymond
-Two black lines, one vertically, Man, one antivertically, Woman.
-Woman and Man shake the boundaries. The house containing them ain't big enough for the both of them.
-Man and Woman push each other into the corner, mutually orthogonal.
-Convexity is absent.


OK I looked at the painting. Athough this isn't expressly forbidden by the reconstructionist method, I wouldn't use "Man" and "Woman" or "house" to describe the lines, that's just confusing and calls for an allegory that is contrary to reconstructionism (it's something you'd find more in traditional interpretation). I would just say the "vertical line" and the "horizontal line" for example. The next point that is missing from the description is the "medium-specific narrative" dimension. Each point in your description is isolated and doesn't interact with the others in a visual way. I'm not saying that you can find interactions that are interesting, this depends on the content.
Raymond January 06, 2022 at 11:35 #639397
Somehow this discussion looks like a discussion I read on this forum.Look here.

There is spoken of a manifesto, like you speak about it. And in the same way, more or less, a conceptual reconstruction of science and its foundation is made. I don't say you have to read it, but the similarity is remarkable.
Raymond January 06, 2022 at 11:38 #639398
Reply to thaumasnot

The medium specific narrative. The kind of paint used? What underground is used? Objective properties?
thaumasnot January 06, 2022 at 11:46 #639400
Quoting Raymond
The medium specific narrative. The kind of paint used? What underground is used? Objective properties?


What you see, and how they interact with each other. Examples : linear transformation, parallelism/intersection, mutation, similarity. The goal is to find a "narrative" : a story of such interactions. Can we find one that is revealing/rewarding ? I must warn you that it's not always possible.
Raymond January 06, 2022 at 11:57 #639402
Reply to thaumasnot

How would that look like for the two lines? What are the objectives everyone sees? How do you tell someone who doesn't see the painting? Or should he see it during the narrative? Do you offer generally applicable instructions to conceptually reconstruct? I haven't read the whole theorem you offered yet, but is that the aim? A kind of objective theory of everything in the realm of products of art? With the aim to intensify pleasure?
thaumasnot January 06, 2022 at 12:24 #639415
Quoting Raymond
How would that look like for the two lines?


That could look like this :

1. The horizontal and vertical lines intersect so that each line is divided into a short and long segment (before and after the intersection point).
2. The long segment of the horizontal line hypostatizes the horizontal dimension of the diamond (by being contained inside, and running across uninterrupted). You can see that this wouldn't work if the horizontal and vertical lines intersected right in the middle of the diamond.
3. The long segment of the vertical line hypostatizes the vertical dimension of the diamond (by being contained inside, and running across uninterrupted).
4. So the horizontal and vertical dimensions of the diamond only "visually intersect" when hypostatized

There are other reconstruction candidates, but that's one.

Quoting Raymond

What are the objectives everyone sees? How do you tell someone who doesn't see the painting? Or should he see it during the narrative? Do you offer generally applicable instructions to conceptually reconstruct? I haven't read the whole theorem you offered yet, but is that the aim? A kind of objective theory of everything in the realm of products of art? With the aim to intensify pleasure?


The reconstruction needs to be read with the painting side-by-side. There are no instructions for reconstruction. Follow your instincts. If nothing comes out of it, say the painting a Jackson Pollock-like mess, well too bad. The goal is to intensify pleasure, yeah.
Raymond January 06, 2022 at 12:40 #639417
Quoting thaumasnot
say the painting a Jackson Pollock-like mess, well too bad. The goal is to intensify pleasure, yeah.
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A JP like mess is sufficient for pleasure...A sufficient, but not necessary condition. Two orthogonal lines do just as well. Unless you don't view a JP-like mess as sufficient for pleasure...
thaumasnot January 06, 2022 at 12:45 #639424
Quoting Raymond
A JP like mess is sufficient for pleasure...A sufficient, but not necessary condition. Two orthogonal lines do just as well. Unless you don't view a JP-like mess as sufficient for pleasure...


Well, pleasure is subjective, so obviously, JP can be a source of pleasure, and that goes without saying. That said, it can also be interesting to reconstruct, if it's not a homogenous mess. I just used it as a metaphor for "homogenous mess", but just to illustrate a point, not intending to say JP is a homogenous mess.
thaumasnot January 06, 2022 at 13:05 #639427
Regarding the reconstruction of Mondrian above, I don't claim any expertise. What I do believe, is that most people can arrive at the same narrative instinctively if they let go of any preconception and just look with good awareness. The reconstruction just helps to accelerate the process.
Raymond January 06, 2022 at 13:25 #639436
Quoting thaumasnot
if they let go of any preconception


But doesn't need a conceptual reconstruction a preconception also? If you were born in old Greek, maybe the instinctive narrative is different from ours? You think all people share the same instinctive narrative? Sounds like scientific realism. We all see the same world. Doesn't the view, the worldview, so to speak, depend on the narrative? If you value the scientific story (and there are a lot of different stories in the book of these stories, short ones, long ones containing dozens of chapters, basic stories, and they feature a wide variety of characters) then that's what you see. If you value other stories then you see different things. But I know what you mean. It's a great story you wrote!
thaumasnot January 06, 2022 at 13:31 #639438
Quoting Raymond
You think all people share the same instinctive narrative?


It's a hunch, not a profound thesis. If I read my reconstruction, I don't see any observation in it that another person couldn't make. On the other hand, if I tell that the lines are a Man and a Woman, I don't expect people to share the same idea.
Metaphysician Undercover January 06, 2022 at 13:59 #639442
Quoting thaumasnot
It has value only relative to the reader/listener, as a helper.


OK, I understand now, it is intended to add to the experience. It's not just something that the interpreter takes from the piece for one's own pleasure, it's also intended to give something to others. I'd say it's sort of like the traditional "Coles Notes" or "Cliffs Notes". These were published as study guides for common high school, college, and even university readings. The idea is to read them as a companion to the original, to assist in understanding the original. You couldn't write your assignment just from reading the Notes though, because it would be evident to the teachers who generally knew the contents of the Notes, resulting in a low mark.

Now that I've got the general idea, I want to understand your approach to the medium, what I call content. You seem to call the whole piece "the content", I like to break the piece into form and content, in a more traditional way. So let me start with what you call the narrative to produce an example.

A narrative is like a story, so it is necessarily extended in time. Time is built in to a narrative, but the narrative need not proceed chronologically so long as the proper indications are made to avoid confusion which would lose the narrative. A static piece, like a painting or a photograph cannot show a narrative, however, a narrative may be implied. So a photograph or painting of activity has an implied narrative, but no real narrative. The implied narrative is open to the imagination of the mind of the interpreter, such that the further you get from the snapshot of the picture, in your interpretation of what is going on, the more imaginary the interpreter's narrative is. There is really no narrative offered by the artist, just a snapshot.

Can you accept this division for me, between what is shown right there, explicit, in the content (the piece) and what is left to the imagination, or implied? And would you agree that the artist's mode of operation is often to stimulate the imagination, this being fundamental to the aesthetic experience? So we might find a sacrifice of the explicit, the artist presenting a vague or unclear content, (metaphor for example), for the sake of the implicit, leaving as much as possible to the imagination of the audience. Perhaps "implicit" is not the right word because it connotes a logical working of the imagination, and here I am talking about a more base form of correlative or associative meaning. Of course there is a fine balance between the two, for the artist to maintain, otherwise one would hand the audience a blank piece of paper and say 'use your imagination'.

How would you personally deal with this gap which exists only in principle? I say it exists only in principle because we generally can't look at a piece and divide it cleanly, saying this is what is explicit and this is what is implicit. From the very top, or the very bottom, everything must be considered as implicit to begin with. What is explicit is a sort of arbitrary judgement. Everything is open to interpretation. In your example, "The music starts with a motif M (0:2 to 0:8) that gets repeated in the next phrase (0:10 to 0:18)", these two might be better expressed as one part of a larger whole. A 6/8 time might be expressed as a 3/4 time if the bars are halved and the eigths are turned into quarters.

So it appears like your goal is to start with what is what I called "explicit", and build upon this, to produce an approach to the implicit. But a good artist knows how to intertwine the implicit with the explicit to the extent that what is explicit is only implicit, meaning that the way to judge what is explicit is only implied. So if an interpreter latched on to certain aspects saying this is what is explicit, and produces an interpretation based on that assumption, it would be fundamentally incorrect from the base up, because what is explicit is only implied. The artist might have created something in which everything is implied (such as abstract art), but it appears as if certain things are explicit, or even the things which appear to be explicit are meant to be metaphoric, etc..

That's long and drawn out, but I'll get to the point now. In the case of producing study Notes for textbook learning, it's pretty much non-controversial as to what is explicit, and "said" by the piece of work, so there's not much of a problem here, though there is enough variance for the teacher to determine what is Notes based. But in the case of much artwork, what is "said" by the piece, (what I call "content") is often the most controversial aspect. What this means is that there is disagreement as to what is explicit. So if you propose to start with what is explicit, and build on that, how do you get beyond this problem of determining what is explicit? A simple mistake in this primary judgement would turn the project into a hinderance for understanding rather than a helper, by pointing the reader in the wrong direction.
thaumasnot January 06, 2022 at 17:30 #639492
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Can you accept this division for me, between what is shown right there, explicit, in the content (the piece) and what is left to the imagination, or implied? And would you agree that the artist's mode of operation is often to stimulate the imagination, this being fundamental to the aesthetic experience?


Yes to both questions.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
So if you propose to start with what is explicit, and build on that, how do you get beyond this problem of determining what is explicit?


I think that the division implicit/explicit might be too academic for what reconstruction is trying to achieve. It's not so much implicit/explicit that matters here, than the ability to match the reconstruction to the content. So if I say "The music starts with a motif M (0:2 to 0:8) that gets repeated in the next phrase (0:10 to 0:18)", it doesn't matter that what I observe is explicit or implicit.

So the real problem is not determining what is explicit versus implicit, but determining what I choose to focus on while experiencing the content (implicit or explicit). Since the motivation is hedonistic, this is an empirical problem. In reconstructionism, the choice is to focus on things like melodic motifs. As you noted, motifs can be looked at from different perspectives, in practice it's not too much of a problem because the way the music is, motifs will often jump at you without you spending much effort. In addition, in your example of looking at a larger structure, you can do it at the same time as keeping in mind the repetition of M (that's the attention span I talk about). Networks of correlation are difficult to keep in mind (many data), and a compromise must typically be struck, where you'll ignore certain parts of the medium. For example, when I listen to listen to metal music, I will focus on the guitar riffs and not pay too much attention to the drums or vocals. There is a certain sensuality in the medium of music that helps filter "useless" correlations (it's empirical of course, and not always the best choice, which is why we share reconstructions, so that others may improve on them or improve theirs). Why would someone do this exercise, which sounds like tedious work ? Because there's sometimes a big payoff at the end, in the form of "beautiful" resolutions (that only narratives can bring). Triumph can only be attained through great adversity.
thaumasnot January 06, 2022 at 18:24 #639509
Quoting Raymond
Somehow this discussion looks like a discussion I read on this forum.Look here.

There is spoken of a manifesto, like you speak about it. And in the same way, more or less, a conceptual reconstruction of science and its foundation is made. I don't say you have to read it, but the similarity is remarkable.


I read the claim and chuckled. It's actually the type of paper that I would reconstruct for fun. I might do it.
Metaphysician Undercover January 07, 2022 at 02:48 #639648
Quoting thaumasnot
I think that the division implicit/explicit might be too academic for what reconstruction is trying to achieve. It's not so much implicit/explicit that matters here, than the ability to match the reconstruction to the content. So if I say "The music starts with a motif M (0:2 to 0:8) that gets repeated in the next phrase (0:10 to 0:18)", it doesn't matter that what I observe is explicit or implicit.


The point was that the content isn't necessarily explicit. So if you take what appears to be explicit content, when the true content is implicit, then you have a false start. You are not really starting with the content at all. Are you familiar with Wittgenstein's rabbit-duck? Suppose you see an explicit duck, in a scenario like this, and you state "duck" as the content. Someone else might call the same content "rabbit". If you do not see it as both a duck and a rabbit, as that is what is intended by the author, and describe it as both, you have not correctly represented the content. So when the content is open to interpretation, i.e. there is nothing explicit, it is all implicit, how do you know that you are describing it correctly? Maybe your technique is only good for certain types of work?

Quoting thaumasnot
So the real problem is not determining what is explicit versus implicit, but determining what I choose to focus on while experiencing the content (implicit or explicit). Since the motivation is hedonistic, this is an empirical problem. In reconstructionism, the choice is to focus on things like melodic motifs. As you noted, motifs can be looked at from different perspectives, in practice it's not too much of a problem because the way the music is, motifs will often jump at you without you spending much effort. In addition, in your example of looking at a larger structure, you can do it at the same time as keeping in mind the repetition of M (that's the attention span I talk about). Networks of correlation are difficult to keep in mind (many data), and a compromise must typically be struck, where you'll ignore certain parts of the medium. For example, when I listen to listen to metal music, I will focus on the guitar riffs and not pay too much attention to the drums or vocals. There is a certain sensuality in the medium of music that helps filter "useless" correlations (it's empirical of course, and not always the best choice, which is why we share reconstructions, so that others may improve on them or improve theirs). Why would someone do this exercise, which sounds like tedious work ? Because there's sometimes a big payoff at the end, in the form of "beautiful" resolutions (that only narratives can bring). Triumph can only be attained through great adversity.


To me, this sems to contradict what you said, that the value of the reconstruction is as a helper. If you just pick and choose from the content, to decide how you want to represent it, how can this help anyone else? Any other person might just pick and choose in one's own way, so why would they want to be influenced by someone else, who might actually ruin one's own experience of the piece. It would be like study notes where the author of the Notes just arbitrarily decided which parts of the work to focus on. That would not be a help.


thaumasnot January 07, 2022 at 08:35 #639713
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
The point was that the content isn't necessarily explicit. So if you take what appears to be explicit content, when the true content is implicit, then you have a false start. You are not really starting with the content at all. Are you familiar with Wittgenstein's rabbit-duck? Suppose you see an explicit duck, in a scenario like this, and you state "duck" as the content. Someone else might call the same content "rabbit". If you do not see it as both a duck and a rabbit, as that is what is intended by the author, and describe it as both, you have not correctly represented the content. So when the content is open to interpretation, i.e. there is nothing explicit, it is all implicit, how do you know that you are describing it correctly? Maybe your technique is only good for certain types of work?


You’re not taking into account the hedonistic goal of reconstruction. It’s not to be correct (in fact, I find trying to reach correctness a boring over-valued speculative endeavour, which is one of the reasons for reconstructionism), although, as I stated before, it does stick to the content like a dog to his bone. In fact, in most cases, for reconstruction the author or authorial intention isn’t even in the picture. So, using your example, yes I might only see the duck and build a narrative around that. Not a problem. It’s not about being correct, but whether the narrative, even with just the duck, is interesting. If one day I read another’s reconstruction speaking about the rabbit and find merit to a narrative with both the rabbit and the duck, I may change my reconstruction. In fact, if the duck-only narrative is better, I’ll keep it and ignore the rabbit.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
To me, this sems to contradict what you said, that the value of the reconstruction is as a helper. If you just pick and choose from the content, to decide how you want to represent it, how can this help anyone else? Any other person might just pick and choose in one's own way, so why would they want to be influenced by someone else, who might actually ruin one's own experience of the piece. It would be like study notes where the author of the Notes just arbitrarily decided which parts of the work to focus on. That would not be a help.


This is answered in one of my previous posts regarding music reconstruction:

Quoting thaumasnot
* People tend to NOT listen making these kinds of observations, don't care about patterns and correlations, etc. They're distracted by other factors, including emotion, aesthetics, immediate sensations
* It's hard to apply the same discipline of observation over a whole song. The reconstruction, as a whole, helps to conceptualize a wide narrative resulting from correlating many observations distributed throughout the song.


So whether a reconstruction helps a given person depends on a few factors, such as their culture, their experience. It can indeed be revolutionary to the person, or banal. But even if it’s banal, it’s still useful. For example, for me at this point this is banal, but I’d be interested to read others’ reconstructions. Because reconstructions are an occasion to re-live the content through others’ eyes (the reason why many of us read reviews of things we already know) in a way that, for me at least, is much more interesting and productive that traditional criticism/reviewing (cf. Manifesto). Through others’ reconstructions, I can also find out new things. Don’t underestimate point 2 above (or even the variance that you mention in regard to implicit stuff).

Another benefit is that reconstruction changes the mindset of consumers. Since the focus moves to the medium-specific narratives, people are more likely to reconstruct great medium-specific narratives. So their selection of what to reconstruct becomes instantly more interesting to a person like me. That’s a potential basis for a reconstructionist community.
thaumasnot January 07, 2022 at 09:19 #639723
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
It would be like study notes where the author of the Notes just arbitrarily decided which parts of the work to focus on.


So regarding the "arbitrary" part : the individual observations of a reconstruction are arbitrary when taken in isolation. That's one of the things another poster in this thread had a hard time dealing with. They read in a reconstruction of a painting "there are verticalities" and don't know what to make of it, probably because they find it arbitrary. The thing is that reconstruction is a narrative, like a story. The reconstruction is made because the reconstructionist found observations that build up to an interesting narrative, with a beginning, a middle and an end. So of course, if you extract any part out of the narrative, it looks arbitrary. It's like quoting anything out of context. For example, "the prince picks a sword" in isolation is arbitrary if you don't know that he picks it to slay the dragon which keeps the princess captive.
Raymond January 07, 2022 at 10:26 #639735
Reply to thaumasnot

The recontruction of a painting then needs context too. I referred to the other thread because also there a context is eliminated. The same kind of context you refer to. It focuses on knowledge, like you focus on a piece of art. There is no piece of art, knowledge, or any kind of material, existing in a vacuum. The duck and the rabbit
can be narrated like a duck, a rabbit, both dubbit or a rabbuck, or just a curvy black line. Or as a collection of particles on a white underground. Any narrative will do when both viewers agree on the narrative. What's the real view? Is the creator of the work important? Is it important what they wanted to say? What if it's an image of gods or a mathematical expression? Or an image trying to convey the meaning of freedom or suffering? What if we look at the Quernica picture by Picasso? Should we take the war or his family into consideration, or just the painting "as it is"?
thaumasnot January 07, 2022 at 10:32 #639739
Quoting Raymond
What's the real view? Is the creator of the work important? Is it important what they wanted to say? What if it's an image of gods or a mathematical expression? Or an image trying to convey the meaning of freedom or suffering? What if we look at the Quernica picture by Picasso? Should we take the war or his family into consideration, or just the painting "as it is"?


All these considerations are obsoleted in a hedonistic endeavour. Choose what you're interested in, and find a medium-specific narrative based on the chosen context/content.
thaumasnot January 07, 2022 at 12:15 #639796
Quoting Raymond
What's the real view? Is the creator of the work important? Is it important what they wanted to say? What if it's an image of gods or a mathematical expression? Or an image trying to convey the meaning of freedom or suffering? What if we look at the Quernica picture by Picasso? Should we take the war or his family into consideration, or just the painting "as it is"?


To help you get an idea why these questions become trivial in the hedonistic context of reconstruction, let's take the Mondrian reconstruction. I could say the painting is by Mondrian for example. That it was painted in a certain period of his life, that it was inspired by other paintings. Now that we've decided that we'll use these facts, the merits of all these considerations can be empirically assessed in relation to the painting. If you take the reconstruction I gave, you can see that these considerations are not necessary at all to the described narrative. For me, they're tacked-on fluff, overused interpretation clichés. In fact, they're not more interesting than if I pretend it was Freud or Einstein who did the painting. So I don't care for them, and don't use them. This is a hedonistic process, not a quest for truth. Now, if you care for them, use them, although I doubt you'll find an interesting medium-specific narrative for them. Traditional interpretation is more suited than reconstruction for that sort of things.
Metaphysician Undercover January 07, 2022 at 14:00 #639833
Reply to thaumasnot
The problem I find is that in many cases the whole narrative might be arbitrary, imaginary, fictional, simply made up. Like in my analogy of a photograph, or still painting, there is absolutely no objective narrative in that medium, because there is no temporal extension, regardless of whether it's a snap shot of an action scene, as a narrative requires temporal extension. So whatever narrative which one comes up with, it would be imaginary, fictional or made up.

This is why I suggested that reconstructionism might be better suited to some forms of art than others. If there is already some form of narrative within the content then a narrative in the reconstruction is justified. But then I don't understand the point, because to be true you'd just want to copy the original as close as possible, and I don't see the purpose to intentionally making a different narrative from the one proposed by the artist, because you might as well just make your own piece of art. This would just be like a disguised plagiarism.

What type of art do you consider is more suited to reconstruction? One with temporal extension, and a real narrative, or one without temporal extension, therefore no inherent narrative?
thaumasnot January 07, 2022 at 14:28 #639845
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
The problem I find is that in many cases the whole narrative might be arbitrary, imaginary, fictional, simply made up. Like in my analogy of a photograph, or still painting, there is absolutely no objective narrative in that medium, because there is no temporal extension, regardless of whether it's a snap shot of an action scene, as a narrative requires temporal extension. So whatever narrative which one comes up with, it would be imaginary, fictional or made up.


In a hedonistic mindset, the fictionality/non-fictionality dichotomy is not a problem. It so happens that in reconstruction, we insist on "pure referentiality" (i.e., everything it says must be traceable), so that may look like an attempt at reaching pure objectivity, but it's not. The only thing that matters is what we can get out of the reconstruction in hedonistic terms.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
This is why I suggested that reconstructionism might be better suited to some forms of art than others.


It is. Why would one want to reconstruct a painting that is a uniform blue (Yves Klein)?

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
But then I don't understand the point, because to be true you'd just want to copy the original as close as possible,


Not really. There are many things in a medium that can be redundant, distracting (e.g., as I mentioned, drums and vocals in metal music), or not an essential part of the narrative ("essential" here is subjective, dictated by the appreciation of the reconstructionist).

Furthermore, as you said, there's the ambiguity of the implicit/explicit content that makes a partial copy a bit tricky.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
What type of art do you consider is more suited to reconstruction? One with temporal extension, and a real narrative, or one without temporal extension, therefore no inherent narrative?


Undoubtedly, music. Then, on par, I'd go with text, movies, comics. Then groups of paintings (triptychs). Last would be standalone paintings. So you can guess that the main criterion is the ability to lay out a narrative temporally. Music is first because it's a focused and still very malleable medium. In theory, movies should be first, but in practice they are not (the medium is comically under-exploited IMO).
Metaphysician Undercover January 08, 2022 at 13:02 #640113
Quoting thaumasnot
Not really. There are many things in a medium that can be redundant, distracting (e.g., as I mentioned, drums and vocals in metal music), or not an essential part of the narrative ("essential" here is subjective, dictated by the appreciation of the reconstructionist).


I wouldn't agree with your interpretation of metal music. Drums are essential to all rock music, setting the intricacies of the rhythm. And in metal music, drums not only set the rhythm but they fill the space for the effect of varying volume densities, which is essential to that genre. That's why compression is not a simple tool for the engineer, and is often avoided. "Loudness" is actually a tricky concept. And vocals are essential to set the attitude. Why concentrate on the guitar, when it all sounds the same from one piece to the next? But that's just personal taste.

Quoting thaumasnot
Undoubtedly, music. Then, on par, I'd go with text, movies, comics. Then groups of paintings (triptychs). Last would be standalone paintings. So you can guess that the main criterion is the ability to lay out a narrative temporally. Music is first because it's a focused and still very malleable medium. In theory, movies should be first, but in practice they are not (the medium is comically under-exploited IMO).


I can see why music suits the style, because it is the classic temporal art form, and your interpretation is based in narrative. Narrative is a temporal expression.
thaumasnot January 08, 2022 at 15:36 #640136
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
I wouldn't agree with your interpretation of metal music. Drums are essential to all rock music, setting the intricacies of the rhythm.


That's why I said reconstruction is a helper. A reconstruction of metal music would totally change how you listen to music (whether it's for the better remains to be seen), even though it just "copies". Your analysis of rock music is very typical (in fact, it isn't far from what in the Manifesto is described as "description for the blind/deaf"), and reconstructionism is historically a separation from the trend it represents.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Why concentrate on the guitar, when it all sounds the same from one piece to the next?


That's the most revealing part of what you said. I constantly said throughout our conversation "let's use the example of the motif M that gets repeated". Why? That's because people have that tendency to go away from it, and you saying "it all sounds the same" is one instance of it. If you focus on things like motifs and correlations, facts like "it all sounds the same" don't even enter the picture. There's a whole new world for you to explore. If you want to explore it is your choice. If you're perfectly happy with rock music, maybe you don't need to, and I'm not here to tell you what to do. I offer an alternative to people who still seek a way to tackle music/art that's deeper and more intellectually rewarding.
Joshs January 08, 2022 at 19:06 #640204
Reply to Metaphysician Undercover Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Like in my analogy of a photograph, or still painting, there is absolutely no objective narrative in that medium, because there is no temporal extension, regardless of whether it's a snap shot of an action scene, as a narrative requires temporal extension.


There is nothing instantaneous about the way we encounter something like a painting. A painting tells a story that unfolds temporally as one’s gaze moves from one object to another within the frame, and then circles back after having formed bits of narrative to be embellished or reconfigured by further looking. The more we stare at a painting, the more it seems
to be doing and changing.

Given that a movie is a series of frames, it constitutes merely a more temporally extended version of what is already a fundamentally temporal affair.

Metaphysician Undercover January 08, 2022 at 21:14 #640249
Quoting thaumasnot
That's why I said reconstruction is a helper. A reconstruction of metal music would totally change how you listen to music (whether it's for the better remains to be seen), even though it just "copies". Your analysis of rock music is very typical (in fact, it isn't far from what in the Manifesto is described as "description for the blind/deaf"), and reconstructionism is historically a separation from the trend it represents.


I guess I just don't understand why I need help to enjoy something I already enjoy. Perhaps if I didn't enjoy it, but wanted to enjoy it, that might help. But what would be the motivation to make me want to enjoy something which I do not. It's as if you treat me like a child and I don't want to eat my peas. You say, follow this technique and I'll help you to make peas taste good. Well, if peas are supposed to be good for me, I might want to develop a taste for peas, therefore follow the technique. But how is something like metal music good for me, so why would I want to develop the taste if I didn't already have it? And if I already had the taste for it, that taste would be based in something personal, so how would the reconstruction do anything but subtract from my enjoyment of it, through distraction?

Quoting Joshs
A painting tells a story that unfolds temporally as one’s gaze moves from one object to another within the frame, and then circles back after having formed bits of narrative to be embellished or reconfigured by further looking.


The point was that this "story" is not explicit, therefore whatever story you imagine, it's not at all objective.

Quoting Joshs
The more we stare at a painting, the more it seems
to be doing and changing.


Oh sorry, I didn't realize this was a school of art appreciation for acid trippers.
Joshs January 08, 2022 at 21:22 #640255
Reply to Metaphysician Undercover
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
The point was that this "story" is not explicit, therefore whatever story you imagine, it's not at all objective.


Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Oh sorry, I didn't realize this was a school of art appreciation for acid trippers


I’ve done a fair amount of painting. Any artist will tell you that the design of a painting explicitly directs the viewer’s
attention as a temporal unfolding. So the view may not recognize the story as explicit, but the creator of the art does.
Metaphysician Undercover January 08, 2022 at 21:29 #640262
Quoting Joshs
Any artist will tell you that the design of a painting explicitly directs the viewer’s
attention as a temporal unfolding. So the view may not recognize the story as explicit, but the creator of the art does.


I agree, that this is the case once in a while. But often the artist wants the viewers to use their minds to create one's own narrative. In this case, the creator does not know the story, because the intention is to allow for whatever story the viewer wants to come up with. One viewer produces one narrative, another produces another, and the artist would say they are both acceptable, because the art was produced without a specific story in mind.
Raymond January 08, 2022 at 21:49 #640268
I tried to express the notion of freedom in a painting. There is a wall with an aperture. Barbed wire spans the aperture. In front of the wire we look at a gigantic back of a bold head. The head is bashed in. Inside the head we see the silhouette of an armed police man, with a helmet and machine gun. Behind the barbed wire, in free space, we see the clay-like shape of a person (no face, only a form with a big head, and a dancing body). The figure dances on a rope in space, holding a stick with a curly ribbon. A view to freedom. Is the notion of freedom an objective feature of the painting?
Metaphysician Undercover January 09, 2022 at 00:48 #640316
Quoting Raymond
Is the notion of freedom an objective feature of the painting?


I'm pretty sure I would not see that painting as an expression of freedom. It's far too violent, and from the description the violence appears to be in the foreground. Try a dove maybe?
thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 10:56 #640405
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Well, if peas are supposed to be good for me, I might want to develop a taste for peas, therefore follow the technique. But how is something like metal music good for me, so why would I want to develop the taste if I didn't already have it?


To be more accurate, it’s not really metal music that’s the subject, but medium-specific narratives. They’re not specific to metal music. They’re actually genre-less. The more you pay attention to them, the more concepts like genre will appear arbitrary and silly. It just so happens that metal has some of the most interesting medium-specific narratives, and at the same time, it could perfectly be argued that a lot of metal (most actually) don’t have interesting medium-specific narratives. So I said “metal music,” but that’s actually a confusing choice of words.

Back to your question. So why would you want to develop the taste if you didn't already have it [taste for medium-specific narratives]? I don’t know. Could be:

1. Curiosity, taste for experiments
2. Existential questioning: if it “all sounds the same”, why have different motifs? In music with more structure than verse/chorus, why bother with such intricate patterns and elaborate song structures? Etc.
3. Doubts regarding traditional analysis/reviewing: the way we talk about music, and how analysis/reviews talk about it, are not how we experience music. What is this gap? The natural extension of this line of questioning is the development of our awareness for medium-specific narratives.
4. Intuition that there’s something more to music. How most people (and that includes 99% of metal fans) listen to music is what I call passive consumption, or superficial, mindless entertainment (I know, because I still listen that way when I’m not concentrating, which is most of the time).
5. The promise of a different type of sensations/payoff. Very roughly, it will lead you to something like big Eureka moments. In metal, you can superficially spot where these moments tend to occur. Traditionally, it’s in the form of “riff breakdowns” that are announced “theatrically”: the vocalist sometimes emit a distinctive exclamative roar, there’s a big break in the drumming, or there’s a striking aesthetic transition (for example, Metallica’s Master of Puppets when it switches to clean-sounding guitars). In the context of “great” medium-specific narratives, these kind of moments gain a whole dimension of significance. In other genres like classical music, these moments are not so much theatricalized. For example, in Vivaldi (who is my go-to when it comes to medium-specific narratives) the moment can aesthetically look like any other moment, and someone with no awareness of the narrative will just not hear anything different.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
And if I already had the taste for it, that taste would be based in something personal, so how would the reconstruction do anything but subtract from my enjoyment of it, through distraction?


Since it’s a totally different way of listening, it lives in a separate plane of enjoyment, so to speak. You can always revert to your old ways. That’s what I do, you can’t always listen with the focus required by the medium-specific narrative, that would be mentally taxing.
thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 11:14 #640410
Quoting Raymond
Is the notion of freedom an objective feature of the painting?


Are you trying to play a game of Dixit or what? (Sorry for the sarcasm...)
Raymond January 09, 2022 at 11:31 #640413
Reply to thaumasnot

I had to look up Dixit. First time encounter for me, so I could not have tried to play it. How can the objective view on the painting reveal that what it's trying to convey? I can give you an objective description of the letters in the word "PHYSICS", first letter, a small vertical with a semi-circle attached right above, second one two parallel verticals with a small horizontal in the middle, etc. but what does the word mean? And even the objective description needs an agreement about what's an objective feature.
thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 11:38 #640414
Quoting Raymond
How can the objective view on the painting reveal that what it's trying to convey? I can give you an objective description of the letters in the word "PHYSICS", first letter, a small vertical with a semi-circle attached right above, second one two parallel verticals with a small horizontal in the middle, etc. but what does the word mean? And even the objective description needs an agreement about what's an objective feature.


I don’t think “objectivity” is a very useful concept here. In most cases, the viewer will see PHYSICS as a word, and I think that’s enough for most purposes.
Raymond January 09, 2022 at 11:45 #640415
Reply to Metaphysician Undercover

The notion of freedom is looked at from the oppressed. Freedom is only meaningful if there is something to be freed of. If there is freedom for every one, like the figure on the rope, freedom is not something to desire for anymore. That's why the painting is called "A look at freedom".
Raymond January 09, 2022 at 11:48 #640416
Reply to thaumasnot

Then you can look at a painting as a painting too, if you look at a word as a word. But what does it mean? Is every painting devoid of meaning?
thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 12:08 #640418
Quoting Raymond
Then you can look at a painting as a painting too, if you look at a word as a word. But what does it mean? Is every painting devoid of meaning?


Your question is essentially the same as the questions about objectivity. Who cares?

There are different types of meaning. Apparently, you look for symbolic meaning, or intentional meaning. I look for "medium-specific-narrative meaning". No meaning is fundamentally better than the other.
thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 12:17 #640421
Quoting Raymond
The notion of freedom is looked at from the oppressed. Freedom is only meaningful if there is something to be freed of. If there is freedom for every one, like the figure on the rope, freedom is not something to desire for anymore. That's why the painting is called "A look at freedom".


That's true. That being said, painting is not necessarily the right medium for expressing what you intend. Given your description, there are many possible interpretations not centered on freedom. For example, one could say it's a painting about serious subjects vs light-hearted subjects. Or a painting about madness in the face of harsh reality. Blablabla
Metaphysician Undercover January 09, 2022 at 13:10 #640432
Reply to thaumasnot

I'm trying to gasp exactly what you mean by "medium-specific narrative". It would seem to be a type of narrative which is specific to a certain medium. But I think in your use, narrative is more particular, so you talk about particular narratives. Or, is it the case that you look for similar narratives in different pieces. For example, you made a sort of comparison between Vivaldi and Metallica. Is comparing narratives acceptable and useful in reconstructionism? I would say that Metallica uses a different medium from Vivaldi, but then "medium" can refer to something very specific or something more general.

If you are looking for narratives which are medium-specific, I would assume that you have a way of classifying media. And the way that media is classified would dictate whether a type of narrative is specific to one medium or not. Then we might see how a type of narrative can cross from one medium to another. If I stretch this to make an example, we might say that distinct genres of music use distinct media, because the medium is manufactured, produced by engineers specifically for the genre. then we might see that narrative types can pass freely from one medium to another. Likewise with a painting and a photograph, distinct media, but possibly similar narratives. And if you allow yourself to become very general in defining your narrative type, you might find that a narrative type found in one medium is actually derived from a very different medium.

Quoting thaumasnot
3. Doubts regarding traditional analysis/reviewing: the way we talk about music, and how analysis/reviews talk about it, are not how we experience music. What is this gap? The natural extension of this line of questioning is the development of our awareness for medium-specific narratives.


I really do not think that this gap can be closed in this way. I think it is a gap fundamental to the way that the human mind works, and we ought not even try to close it. Experiencing music, or any art work, begins as a passive reception of the piece. Sometimes we are inclined, or encouraged by the artist, toward active participation, sing along, clap, or dance, for example. The active participation is a direct response, as an "affect", derived from the emotions of the observer. It's an emotion driven activity.

When we describe the art, "talk about" it, this is a reflective activity. So it's a matter of the conscious mind looking back at what has already been experienced, which is very different from allowing the affections of a direct experience. We might say that the affections are filtered by the mind when we look back. If one looks at a reconstruction, and approaches a piece with the reconstruction in hand, then an attempt is made to filter the experience prior to it occurring. That significantly effects the experience, more often than not I believe, in a negative way. This is what happens for instance when you read reviews prior to watching a movie. It focuses the anticipatory aspect of affection, and experience in general, in an unnatural way.

We do not ever close the gap between passive experience and active participation in this way, because it's based in a false sense of "knowing what will happen". This is why a live music performance of a song you've heard a hundred times on the same recording, has so much more affect. It allows for the unknown. Being in reception of the unknown is fundamental to the experience. But when we turn around and reflect, it is all coming from within so there is no element of surprise, no unknown. So the gap between passive and active is only really closed in the experience itself, where the presence of the unknown causes a real need for an active sort of affection. Otherwise, the affection is artificially passive, caused by that sense of knowing what will happen. Of course there is always a certain interplay of the two, but attempting to remove the unknown will not produce an affection consistent with true experience.

Quoting thaumasnot
5. The promise of a different type of sensations/payoff. Very roughly, it will lead you to something like big Eureka moments. In metal, you can superficially spot where these moments tend to occur. Traditionally, it’s in the form of “riff breakdowns” that are announced “theatrically”: the vocalist sometimes emit a distinctive exclamative roar, there’s a big break in the drumming, or there’s a striking aesthetic transition (for example, Metallica’s Master of Puppets when it switches to clean-sounding guitars). In the context of “great” medium-specific narratives, these kind of moments gain a whole dimension of significance. In other genres like classical music, these moments are not so much theatricalized. For example, in Vivaldi (who is my go-to when it comes to medium-specific narratives) the moment can aesthetically look like any other moment, and someone with no awareness of the narrative will just not hear anything different.


I don't see these features you describe as features of the narrative, but more like points where the narrative breaks down, to be replaced by a lack of narrative, something distinctly new, as if 'out of place'. This shows the importance of the unknown. The artist lulls you into a feeling of comfort, telling you a bedtime story, then all of a sudden the story is gone, and the artist is somewhere else completely. That's the power of the dichotomy in anticipation. When you're drawn into a story, you have a strong sense of knowing what will happen because it's confined within that story. Even though the story could twist and turn, and you know not what's coming up, it's actually extremely confined, as within that particular story. Therefore the anticipatory feature of your experience is highly subdued. But the artist has the capacity to jump right out of the story, at any moment, and since your anticipatory capacity has been dulled by the story, you get caught completely by surprise. The artist did something completely contrary to intuition, something seemingly impossible, suddenly transcending the story.

Raymond January 09, 2022 at 13:29 #640433
Quoting thaumasnot
No meaning is fundamentally better than the other.


I agree. But if the painting, word, or any other piece of art are used to convey a meaning, won't it do unjustice to the painting, word, or any other piece, if you tell a story about it that is meaning independent? If you treat a word like a word, say PHYSICS, without the meaning attached, doesn't that rob the word of an essential feature? You can project a new meaning into it, so the word (the word being a piece of art in the sense it is a painting of black lines on white linen) or any other piece of art means what the medium-specific narrative tells you, but was this meant by the writer of the word PHYSICS? The new meaning becomes what is meant by the new narrative. Could be an interesting meaning.

thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 13:34 #640434
Quoting Raymond
but was this meant by the writer of the word PHYSICS?


Who cares about the author? Sometimes I'll find an interpretation that's even more interesting than what the writer intended, and that'll be fine. Sometimes it'll be worse, well, too bad.
Raymond January 09, 2022 at 13:39 #640435
Reply to thaumasnot

But if you cut it loose from being a conveyor of meaning, then what use is there in art at all?
thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 13:53 #640441
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
I'm trying to gasp exactly what you mean by "medium-specific narrative"


May I re-use the example of motif M that gets repeated for the nth time? Well, that kind of thing. So medium is music, the same for both Metallica and Vivaldi. I say "medium-specific" because for another medium, painting for example, obviously it won't be about melodic motifs, but visual patterns.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Is comparing narratives acceptable and useful in reconstructionism?


Yes. But not for classification purposes. It's more for creation. If you can compare narratives, you can avoid re-doing existing narratives unintentionally. You can also use comparisons to create personal benchmarks.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
I really do not think that this gap can be closed in this way. I think it is a gap fundamental to the way that the human mind works, and we ought not even try to close it.


I agree, we ought not try to close that gap which is part of traditional analysis. That's why I offer reconstruction outside of this whole way at looking back. Please keep in mind the example of motif M to understand what I mean precisely.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
The artist did something completely contrary to intuition, something seemingly impossible, suddenly transcending the story.


Well, it's still part of the story. In the case of medium-specific narratives; obviously, motif M can be used in unexpected ways. How this is achieved exactly is the interesting part, and this is the whole medium-specific narrative.
thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 13:55 #640442
Quoting Raymond
But if you cut it loose from being a conveyor of meaning, then what use is there in art at all?


I don't get what you're saying. We can always talk about something without talking about the author. There's value in that.
thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 14:16 #640447
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
So the gap between passive and active is only really closed in the experience itself, where the presence of the unknown causes a real need for an active sort of affection.


So, about this active thing. What I mean by active consumption in the context of reconstruction is the activity of correlating things (the basis of any narrative). As you can see from the "copy" aspect of reconstruction, reconstruction is a little replica of the experience. In fact, the property of "pure referentiality" almost means it is the experience itself, except in a guided way. Ultimately, the reader of a reconstruction can ditch the reconstruction, and live the experience the way the reconstruction suggested.
thaumasnot January 09, 2022 at 16:52 #640476
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Is comparing narratives acceptable and useful in reconstructionism?


To correct my previous response (“not for classification purposes”), this could actually lead to building a knowledge base not unlike Christopher Alexander’s design patterns in architecture. I used to be interested in doing that, but now it’s not my focus.
Metaphysician Undercover January 11, 2022 at 14:05 #641270
Quoting thaumasnot
So medium is music, the same for both Metallica and Vivaldi. I say "medium-specific" because for another medium, painting for example, obviously it won't be about melodic motifs, but visual patterns.


We have a difference in our understanding of "medium". I would say that "music" is a classification of art form, a type of artistic expression. The medium used by the musician is sound, and there is distinct aspects of that medium, rhythm and pitch for example. Notice that aural narrative, referring to the act of telling a story with words, uses the same fundamental medium, sound, but it doesn't have refined (or defined) rhythm and pitch. Because different forms of artistic expression might use the same fundamental medium, and also one form of artistic expression might be presented through a number of different media, I think it's best to maintain a distinction between "medium" and "art form".

Quoting thaumasnot
Well, it's still part of the story. In the case of medium-specific narratives; obviously, motif M can be used in unexpected ways. How this is achieved exactly is the interesting part, and this is the whole medium-specific narrative.


I must admit I haven't been able to grasp your example of "motif". A motif is a particular form which may be repeated, and it may even be copied to another piece. It is a particular way of using the medium, which is repeated. But motifs are not medium specific. There are visual motifs as much as there are sound motifs. And, a particular motif is specific to a particular piece, until it is copied to another. We can talk about what types of motifs are specific to certain types of media, but I do not think that this is your intent. It appears like you want to talk about particular motifs as if they a part of the medium. But they are not, they are a part of the form created by the artist. Only if an artist stole a motif from somewhere else, would it not be created by that artist. And this is why we need to maintain the distinction between "medium" and "art form". If a motif were part of the medium, an artist could plagiarize motifs freely, claiming to just be using the medium available.

Quoting thaumasnot
So, about this active thing. What I mean by active consumption in the context of reconstruction is the activity of correlating things (the basis of any narrative). As you can see from the "copy" aspect of reconstruction, reconstruction is a little replica of the experience. In fact, the property of "pure referentiality" almost means it is the experience itself, except in a guided way. Ultimately, the reader of a reconstruction can ditch the reconstruction, and live the experience the way the reconstruction suggested.


But don't you think that being "guided" takes away from the experience? If the artist is using the element of surprise, then the guide could rob the artist of that technique. It's one thing for the artist to provide some form of guidance, as a footnote to an art piece, or something like that, but for someone else to be doing the guiding just seems wrong. Suppose you are going to watch a movie, and someone else comes and describes to you, their experience from the movie, then says "go and have your own experience". Well it's already too late, the person has stolen your capacity to have your own experience, by giving you their own.
thaumasnot January 11, 2022 at 19:05 #641347
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
The medium used by the musician is sound, and there is distinct aspects of that medium, rhythm and pitch for example. Notice that aural narrative, referring to the act of telling a story with words, uses the same fundamental medium, sound, but it doesn't have refined (or defined) rhythm and pitch. Because different forms of artistic expression might use the same fundamental medium, and also one form of artistic expression might be presented through a number of different media, I think it's best to maintain a distinction between "medium" and "art form".


The discourse stays the same even if the medium is sound, so the distinction doesn’t matter here. You could reconstruct instruments + lyrics, that works too (usually doesn’t happen, it’s complex enough with just melodies).

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
But motifs are not medium specific. There are visual motifs as much as there are sound motifs.


I’m not saying that motifs in general are medium-specific. In fact, I avoid generalizations like that (reconstructionism is not a theory, more a way of life).

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
It appears like you want to talk about particular motifs as if they a part of the medium


I use medium roughly in the sense “perceived physical manifestation”. Even if we don’t agree with that definition, the only thing that matters is that I mean by “medium-specific narrative” a narrative whose elements are things you perceive in the content. So they’re visual, audible, readable, etc. things. It’s important because it contrasts traditional interpretation, which goes beyond these things.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
But don't you think that being "guided" takes away from the experience?


I would agree for other types of guides. But in our case, the guide is so intimately linked to the experiencing of the content that it might as well be the experience itself. That’s because if you read “motif M is repeated at XX:XX”, it, by convention, invites you to listen to the music at XX:XX and observe for yourself. Unlike other guides of a speculative nature, it is not dogmatic. It doesn’t ask you to agree (what it says is pretty trivial in isolation). It invites you to an activity that is experiential in nature.

Also the fact that it describes an activity means it doesn’t work like a normal spoiler (imagine the reconstruction of a book/movie). Spoilers are typically very small pieces of information that spoil a whole experience. Reconstructions are narratives, they’re experiential. If you read a reconstruction of a beautiful medium-specific narrative in a movie before seeing the movie, you still experience the beauty, so it’s not emotionally the same type of spoiler (I would argue it’s a non-frustrating type of spoiler).
Metaphysician Undercover January 12, 2022 at 01:32 #641453
Quoting thaumasnot
I use medium roughly in the sense “perceived physical manifestation”. Even if we don’t agree with that definition, the only thing that matters is that I mean by “medium-specific narrative” a narrative whose elements are things you perceive in the content. So they’re visual, audible, readable, etc. things. It’s important because it contrasts traditional interpretation, which goes beyond these things.


The problem though, is that perception has interpretation built in, inherent within. Let's go back to your example of the word "PHYSICS".

Quoting thaumasnot
In most cases, the viewer will see PHYSICS as a word, and I think that’s enough for most purposes.


When I'm reading, I don't see the things I am reading as words. So I do not see "physics" as a word, when I come across that word in a piece of writing. I talk about it now as a word, but when I'm reading I see each particular word as the word it is, and read it as that particular word, giving it meaning according to context, but I do not see any of the words as words, that's just how we refer to them when we talk about them.

So when you go to a "perceived physical manifestation", like motif M for instance, and single it out as a motif, and say that this, as a motif, is a perceived physical manifestation, it's not really true. Just like I don't perceive the word "physics" as a word, when I'm reading, I don't perceive motif M as a motif when I hear the music. It's all part of a complex piece. So when you analyze, and say that this part is motif M, which I perceive, that's not really true, because I do not perceive it as a motif.

This is the difference between your conception of "medium" and mine. The motif, you see as part of the medium, a physical manifestation, I see it as something created by the artist.
thaumasnot January 12, 2022 at 09:26 #641648
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
When I'm reading, I don't see the things I am reading as words. So I do not see "physics" as a word, when I come across that word in a piece of writing. I talk about it now as a word, but when I'm reading I see each particular word as the word it is, and read it as that particular word


That’s quite confusing. “When I'm reading, I don't see the things I am reading as words” followed by “I'm reading I see each particular word as the word it is”.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
This is the difference between your conception of "medium" and mine. The motif, you see as part of the medium, a physical manifestation, I see it as something created by the artist.


It’s not something that matters to reconstruction (as a hedonistic endeavour). If you care about this, you can even use your definition. The medium could come from an artist, a UFO, or be generated randomly by a computer. You can also try to reconstruct anything you experience in real life (quite useful when interpreting political discourses or pseudo-scientific debates for example).
Raymond January 12, 2022 at 10:03 #641698
The more I think about it it the more I like it! It (CR), at least, doesn't have that pompous intention most standard interpretations have! And because it allows allows anything from the UFO, to politics, to "pseudo"-scientific debate.
Raymond January 12, 2022 at 10:30 #641708
Reply to Metaphysician Undercover

The strange thing with words is that they talk to us. You can consider them as objects on their own, as drawings, but then they cease to talk. You need other words to express what you see.

Reply to thaumasnot

How does it help in interpreting political and pseudoscientific talk? Don't these have to be interpreted firstly, as being political and pseudo?
thaumasnot January 12, 2022 at 11:03 #641718
Quoting Raymond
How does it help in interpreting political and pseudoscientific talk?


By making you pay attention not to the meaning of words or the truth of statements, but how the words are used, their context in the discourse, and how the usage evolves through the debate/discourse (in other words, to the narrative of usage). To illustrate why it’s useful to not focus exclusively on something like truth, imagine a debate, politician A mentions an inconsistency in the discourse of politician B, B counters with an argument about something else, but while the argument is true, it diverts the attention away from A’s first point, so B never responds to A and gets away with it. Reconstruction traces these kinds of meanderings, and more. This also works when interpreting trials and pseudo-science. Reconstructing how pseudo-scientific conclusions can be reached is quite amusing and enlightening.
Metaphysician Undercover January 12, 2022 at 11:56 #641733
Quoting thaumasnot
That’s quite confusing. “When I'm reading, I don't see the things I am reading as words” followed by “I'm reading I see each particular word as the word it is”.


I know it's confusing, but I thought I explained it well enough to dispel the confusion. When I'm reading I don't see them as words. But when I reflect on what is written, or talk about it in any way, not reading it, I see them as words. I only see them as words when I'm not reading it. When I'm reading it, I'm not thinking 'that's a word, that's a word, that's a word' etc., because I am too busy reading. And reading does not consist of seeing things as words, it's a matter of deriving meaning, not a matter of judging things as words. I cannot do both at the same time, read the material, and also count the words.

Quoting thaumasnot
It’s not something that matters to reconstruction (as a hedonistic endeavour). If you care about this, you can even use your definition. The medium could come from an artist, a UFO, or be generated randomly by a computer. You can also try to reconstruct anything you experience in real life (quite useful when interpreting political discourses or pseudo-scientific debates for example).


If this is the case then how can you say that the purpose of it is to help others? Unless there is some attempt to try and understand what the artist is doing, how can you call this a type of "help"? Take a politician's speech for example, you'd say, look at the cool patterns in the way this guy uses "make America great again", in relation to some other phrases used by that politician, but how is that supposed to be helpful?

Quoting thaumasnot
Reconstructing how pseudo-scientific conclusions can be reached is quite amusing and enlightening.


Isn't this something completely different though, something called logic? With logic, there are strict standards, formal rules, which the patterns of word usage must follow. If we analyze the pattern and find that it strays from the rules. we can say that the conclusion is invalid. But that's something different from simply reconstructing the patterns, it's also judging the patterns according to some standards. I can see how this would be helpful, if your judgements are according to some accepted standards, like logic provides us with. When you do reconstruction, and you judge the work which you are reconstructing, where do you derive your standards of judgement from?

thaumasnot January 12, 2022 at 12:57 #641771
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
I know it's confusing, but I thought I explained it well enough to dispel the confusion. When I'm reading I don't see them as words. But when I reflect on what is written, or talk about it in any way, not reading it, I see them as words. I only see them as words when I'm not reading it. When I'm reading it, I'm not thinking 'that's a word, that's a word, that's a word' etc., because I am too busy reading. And reading does not consist of seeing things as words, it's a matter of deriving meaning, not a matter of judging things as words. I cannot do both at the same time, read the material, and also count the words.


I see what you mean, but I don’t think it’s a very useful subtlety, because it leads to phrases like “When I read, it’s not words.” I mean, I don’t think anyone except maybe you would say that. In the same vein, you could say “I don’t eat food, I only see it as food when I’m not eating it” etc. It’s just confusing.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Unless there is some attempt to try and understand what the artist is doing, how can you call this a type of "help"? Take a politician's speech for example, you'd say, look at the cool patterns in the way this guy uses "make America great again", in relation to some other phrases used by that politician, but how is that supposed to be helpful?


Correlating phrases helps to spot things like contradictions, omissions, fallacies, babbling, etc. Obviously, people didn’t need reconstructions to spot these already, but it can be argued they were sort of doing reconstruction before it was called reconstructionism. At a small scale (short political discourses for example), reconstruction of discourses is basically the same as traditional analysis.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
Isn't this something completely different though, something called logic?


Great question. Logic is focused on the errors or false statements. It’s a pinpointing thing. Reconstruction makes you focus on the whole reasoning that led to the error/false statement or was built on the error/false statement. The “help” here is not in establishing that the reasoning was wrong. Logic can do that. It’s to make you appreciate how the reasoning was “constructed”. You’ll surely remark that in doing so, reconstruction uses logic, and that’s true. In that case, the “content” considered by the reconstructionist is the combination of that logic with the pseudo-scientific text. In reconstructionism, the process of defining the content is a formal step that I call “conventional medium delimitation”. It’s just a convention, not a profound statement of truth.

It could be argued that it’s more interesting to see how errors are made than how a perfect scientific text is constructed. The empirical argument is that there are millions of ways of making errors, and only one way to be correct. And learning how we make errors is quite interesting, not only theoretically, but also as a lesson. So reconstruction is not primarily about finding errors, but rather about discovering reasoning patterns, and that’s a fun endeavour (hedonism).
Metaphysician Undercover January 16, 2022 at 13:50 #643788
Quoting thaumasnot
Correlating phrases helps to spot things like contradictions, omissions, fallacies, babbling, etc. Obviously, people didn’t need reconstructions to spot these already, but it can be argued they were sort of doing reconstruction before it was called reconstructionism. At a small scale (short political discourses for example), reconstruction of discourses is basically the same as traditional analysis.


I see a problem with this sort of thing, because the same word in different contexts has different meanings. So when you remove phrases from their contexts and say look, here's a contradiction, when it's really not a contradiction at all, because of the difference in context, that's being disrespectful to the author.

Quoting thaumasnot
Great question. Logic is focused on the errors or false statements. It’s a pinpointing thing. Reconstruction makes you focus on the whole reasoning that led to the error/false statement or was built on the error/false statement. The “help” here is not in establishing that the reasoning was wrong. Logic can do that. It’s to make you appreciate how the reasoning was “constructed”. You’ll surely remark that in doing so, reconstruction uses logic, and that’s true. In that case, the “content” considered by the reconstructionist is the combination of that logic with the pseudo-scientific text. In reconstructionism, the process of defining the content is a formal step that I call “conventional medium delimitation”. It’s just a convention, not a profound statement of truth.


Most reasoning is outside the formal constraints of logic, so I can see how reconstruction would be useful if it could help someone to recognize different styles of thought process. There is for example abductive reasoning, and different people have different ways for dealing with probabilities.

What I have the most difficulty with is your idea of medium delimitation. I think that the difference between what you call the medium and what I call the medium is significant, and this shows in what I say above. I would say that the medium on its own, must be considered to be completely passive, and cannot be assigned any meaning toward the piece of work. All the meaning is what has been given to it by the author. So any time that you remove a part of a narrative from its context, you cannot assign any meaning to that piece, because all its meaning is derived from its position in the narrative.

For example, there is a trend in modern TV, for a series to develop a character's personality over many episodes, even over numerous seasons. I actually find it rather boring, and unreal because I find that they'll spend an unreasonable amount of time demonstrating a person's character as being a certain way, then all of a sudden the person will start to do things right outside of one's character, seeming to undergo a significant change in character. From my perspective, I would say the person would never do something like that, the act is out of character for that person, so I see it as unrealistic, and I'm pissed off that they tricked me into thinking that the person was otherwise.

And with good editing they can even do this with "reality" shows. They show numerous, very particular types of actions, by the person, to make you think you understand the person's character. But they've actually created a false representation with crafty editing. Then all of a sudden they'll show the person doing something completely inconsistent with that, completely outside the realm of what you think that person is capable of doing, based on what they've already shown you. And this is supposed to be a filming of real life, "reality" TV.

So editing film footage for a "reality" show is like a reconstructive interpretation. And you can see how taking parts from the narrative (parts from the true narrative offered by the author, or by the complete set of footage taken in filming the "reality" show), you can very easily create a "sub-narrative" which doesn't have to be at all consistent with the true narrative. And you can very easily create a false narrative simply by removing bits and pieces from their proper context, and producing a new context with these bits and pieces.

Quoting thaumasnot
It could be argued that it’s more interesting to see how errors are made than how a perfect scientific text is constructed. The empirical argument is that there are millions of ways of making errors, and only one way to be correct. And learning how we make errors is quite interesting, not only theoretically, but also as a lesson. So reconstruction is not primarily about finding errors, but rather about discovering reasoning patterns, and that’s a fun endeavour (hedonism).


I propose that you turn this perspective around, consider that there is a vast multitude of ways to be correct, and only one way to be incorrect. There are many ways to be correct because correctness is determined in relation to the end, if the end is achieved. Notice that there is a vast variance in ends themselves, and even if we define a particular end, there can be a number of different ways to achieve it. Each of these produces a "correct" way. However, any time there is determined a "correct" way, what is inconsistent with this is often called "incorrect". But when that supposed "incorrect" way is seen to be consistent with a slightly variant end, then it is actually a correct way according to that different end. This leaves only one way to be "incorrect", and that is to be consistent with no end whatsoever. What is consistent with no end is a mistake. Therefore there is only one way to be incorrect, and that is to make a mistake.

So when we look at all the different ways that people do things, we cannot say such and such is incorrect, (eg., point to the the phrases which have been removed from context, and say there is contradiction), we look at the different ways as being different. And being different means that they were done for a different purpose, from the one which I apprehend, and this makes it appears as incorrect, to me. But if I can determine the purpose, then what seemed incorrect to me, becomes correct because I've found the proper context. And only if I can demonstrate that it is inconsistent with any possible purpose, can I say that it is an accident, a mistake, and therefore incorrect.
thaumasnot January 17, 2022 at 17:14 #644301
Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
I see a problem with this sort of thing, because the same word in different contexts has different meanings. So when you remove phrases from their contexts and say look, here's a contradiction, when it's really not a contradiction at all, because of the difference in context, that's being disrespectful to the author.


This isn’t how reconstruction works. As stated in the manifesto, when you quote something in a reconstruction, there is an implied convention that invites the reader to refer to the context of the source material (it’s described in the section that talks about pure referentiality, definitions and their context). Now, I do agree that, in the context of reconstructing non-fiction (i.e., not always for hedonistic purposes), there are 2 problems, which are not specific to reconstruction, regarding (1) implicit context, and (2) explicit context (that can be found in the text). Regarding (1), in reconstructionism, we always try to assume as little as possible. In fact, it can be argued that reconstruction is the most respectful type of analysis, because it gives the text a chance to develop a meaning. What do I mean by that? If one reconstructs, for example, a Hitler discourse that says that “aryan blood is the purest,” the reconstructionist won’t try to accept or challenge the truth of the statement or meaning of “aryan” or “pure”. They will ask “so what?” and continue to read the text until it can contextualize what the orator meant with respect to the whole text. It’s a bit like Jacques Derrida’s deconstruction, when it compares what a text declares, and what a text actually states. Always regarding (1), obviously, we have to make some minimal assumptions regarding meaning and context, and this isn’t always a unanimous process, but we have to be pragmatic here. Secondly, errors can absolutely be made during reconstruction (i.e., quoting out of context, which is not in the spirit of reconstructionism). So it’s useful to share reconstructions if only for sanity checking.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
So any time that you remove a part of a narrative from its context, you cannot assign any meaning to that piece, because all its meaning is derived from its position in the narrative.


Absolutely. And reconstruction assigns as little meaning as possible. In fact, you could say that it provides the basic material for other people to assign meaning later if they wish to.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
then all of a sudden the person will start to do things right outside of one's character, seeming to undergo a significant change in character. From my perspective, I would say the person would never do something like that, the act is out of character for that person, so I see it as unrealistic, and I'm pissed off that they tricked me into thinking that the person was otherwise.


From a purely theoretical standpoint, an artist is not bound to create realistic content or to conform to expectations, and if you don’t want to potentially “disrespect” them, you have to keep an open mind. “Realism” is as much a purely artistic (non-universal) concept as non-realism (which is why there are movies that start with “based on a true story”, when they aren’t). In medium-specific narratives, what matters is not whether it’s realistic or not, but what narrative purpose it serves (if a “bad” characterization serves no purpose in the narrative, then I would argue that a “good” characterization would not either, and is just something nice to have, but not essential). In the context of reconstruction, I would advise reconstructionists to overlook what we traditionally deem as shortcomings, and look at a bigger picture than bad characterization (and similarly, stuff like bad acting in movies).

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
And with good editing they can even do this with "reality" shows. They show numerous, very particular types of actions, by the person, to make you think you understand the person's character. But they've actually created a false representation with crafty editing.


As I said above, reconstruction is all about the conservation of intra-medium context (cf. manifesto section about attention span and sensory memory). It is true that reconstruction filters a lot of content (which does look like quoting out of context, but is not), but it’s usually done because this content is deemed redundant, unnecessary, tangential, etc. For example, if a reconstruction is of a story about a princess saved by the prince from a dragon, it (probably) doesn’t matter to the narrative what the princess wears, if there was a storm when the prince fought the dragon, etc.

Quoting Metaphysician Undercover
There are many ways to be correct because correctness is determined in relation to the end, if the end is achieved.


“One way to be correct” was probably not the best way to put it. Let me use a metaphor. Imagine the end is to build any Lego castle (or solve any theorem). There is one constraint (logic): all the pieces must be yellow (all the statements of the solution must be true). Obviously, as you remarked, there are still many ways to build a castle (solve a theorem) with this constraint, so it’s still interesting to reconstruct. But there are (intuitively) way more possibilities to build a castle with all kinds of colors (all kinds of mistakes). In the case of the theorem, you could imagine mistaking an x (lower case) for an X (upper case), using a necessary condition like a necessary and sufficient condition, forgetting to prove something, applying a lemma in a context where the lemma’s hypotheses are not verified, etc.